What a heart he carries

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Ebrahim Algobi
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What a heart he carries

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What a heart he carries

I like all characters except the liar
I don't know how a person has the audacity to lie to someone whose affection is obvious
roll! Doesn't he feel stinky inside!
Sadeq Ala
Doesn't he feel that he doesn't itch even if his lie is small from him
I don't know how he meets him every day with the same innocent face
I don't know how he can look into his eyes and not be ashamed
While he wishes him well and strives for it
while he befriends him in pleasure and displeasure
He is not true to either of them.
It is said that milk is associated with intimacy
Sometimes
Eh, didn't he tell you honestly even once!
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Wow, no pregnancy
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I found great delight in the poem "What a heart he carries." Its simplicity is remarkable, demonstrating how just a few words can convey profound and meaningful thoughts. The beauty of this poem lies in its ability to be interpreted in various ways, a characteristic of exceptional poetry. It's a composition that resonates and lingers in one's thoughts. 😊
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