If we weren't a watcher!

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Ebrahim Algobi
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If we weren't a watcher!

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If we weren't a watcher!

Why is it so clear that he is
to be human
It's hard
Catch up on the details of two events, and note the slightest of their actions
I know when it's raining and when it's raining
I know when one of my characteristics changes, I know when the tone of my voice changes..
It bothers me that I make the remark to this extent
It may seem on the surface
It's fun, but inside it's hard and painful
How much I tried not to pay more attention than what was required, but I couldn't.
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It seems that the matter is overpowered!
Until you guessed the verb before it happened, guess the word before it was spoken
Sometimes I feel like I understand some people with this course!
To this limit..
For the first time, I wished I hadn't been a star
. . . . .
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I really liked the poem "If we weren't a watcher!" because of its simplicity. It's amazing how a few words can convey profound ideas, and this poem manages to do that really well. It allows for personal interpretation, which is one of the strengths of poetry, making it a highly enjoyable piece. 😊
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