You leave each other lightly

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Ebrahim Algobi
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You leave each other lightly

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You leave each other lightly

I realized not so long ago
Sometimes we need your friend that we don't know
A tuner does not unite us, nor do we enumerate it
Send, coincidences of days will bring it as if it were God
Mountains.. a shoulder from them, don't lean, come to bear
He does not ask about their concern, and he does not complain about their concern
A hadith brings you together, clears a long night
He is removed with a light blow from the back of what he has drunk.
Some lightly. You get drunk.. and leave
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I found the poem "You leave each other lightly" to be quite enjoyable, mainly due to its simplicity. This poem's brevity allows for personal interpretation, which I think is one of the strengths of poetry. It's amazing how a few words can convey deep ideas, and this poem does so effectively. 😊
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