He thought it all

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Ebrahim Algobi
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He thought it all

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He thought it all

He thought everything except that his brokenness was at the height of his agony.
except for his tears at every defeat,
He thought he had extended it and turned it away, not knowing that he was behind his defeats every time
He kept him idly by while he could
Whenever he is concerned about something, he extinguishes his aspiration
Make him live in autumn while he is in spring
And what is behind these suspicions?
s
Then he confronted him, and the dear one blamed him! to
Rather, the Lord was one of those..
. . . . .
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I like the poem "He thought it all" in general. It has a simplicity that's quite refreshing. The brevity of the phrase leaves much to the imagination and encourages readers to interpret its meaning in their own way. Sometimes, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to convey profound thoughts with just a few words. 😊
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Post by Nallely Rangel »

Au aunque sea un poema corto tiene un mensaje que deja a uno pensando asu imaginacion.. me encanta la poesia
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