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I hope you like it; keep in mind it is going through a rewrite and re-edit. Enjoy! ?Treasurechest wrote:Hello,Im literally on the 2nd page So can't really give any input on it as of now.But when I"m done I will be back with my ratings
I hope you like it, keep in mind, I’m aware of the editing issues, and am working very hard to fix them.Naval Aulakh wrote:I have not yet read this book but I have read the several reviews of this book and I would like to read it. After that I would decide what rating should be given to this book.
Thank you for the feedback. As I've said in previous posts, the book out there is basically my first draft. We are hard at work on the rewrite, and I've hired a new editor. Thanks for reading the book, I hope you get a chance to read the 2nd release when it’s done.gaporter wrote:I give this book only 1 star, and I'd give it less if I could. I found it really hard to read all the way through. It seemed like a bad Supernatural fanfiction. The characters are flat, the dialogue is cheesy, and the writing style is overall very immature. There are several errors and it just wasn't scary. I think there is potential though, if the author does some edits and rewrites some scenes.
InterestingLifeTimeBookAddict wrote: ↑26 Oct 2016, 10:10 I gave this book 3 of 4 stars, but I don't know if I found the place to post my own review of books on this website. I had the same issues on the lack of editing, and for me, it's a huge distraction, having a background in English. Even when I'm not in "proofreading mode" I read as if the work is the final draft, so that's a problem for me... That said, it was a book I couldn't put down and wanted to know how it would end. The twisted sexual ghost and animal cruelty made me a bit queasy, but I've read worse from Stephen King and Dean Koontz, so if that's your thing, Janet Leigh Green is on track!
As others have said, I'd recommend it with caution to mature adults who can handle this level of sexual supernatural in a novel, but I wouldn't recommend it to anyone who I knew would be offended or uninterested in this type of ghostly horror. And then there's the premarital sex factor that some people are strongly against, even in a fictitious book. Not saying I'm a prude or a saint, but you know the audience I'm speaking of.