Review by REIGN GODDESS -- Alibi Island by SLMN
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Review by REIGN GODDESS -- Alibi Island by SLMN
Alibi Island by SLMN is an account of sexual predation, child molestation, cannibalism, physical assault of children and every horrific act of violence meted against children by narcissistic psychopaths. It foregrounds the selfish desires of the political class and other wealthy individuals from across the world. The vividness through which this story is told makes me to only recommend it to adults. Readers that are quite sceptical about gory scenes may want to avoid this book as well.
I found seven grammatical mistakes that could easily be flagged down by a professional editor and thus believe that this book should be run through another round of editing. It is unfortunate that I have to rate this book three out of four stars, however much I would have loved to give it a maximum rating. I found some segments of the plot poorly developed. In between the story line, the author's rush to get ahead of the characters ended up making some parts to be hurriedly concluded, for example the part where Passion, Sven and May-Joy were recaptured by Rosa and her accomplices. Providing a short description of what transpired thereafter killed my psyche and detracted my attention from the book by a great deal. I also personally found this book too short, especially for the subject matter of discussion and the settings in which events unfolded. I believe that the author should have spent more time in vividly describing the environment that the victims of sexual abuse were kept in, to enable me make mental notes of the smell, taste and even the tension the reigned in such places. However, these are my personal concerns, which may not relate with other readers. There is nothing else that I liked least about this book.
Macy vowed to die rather than endure the cruel treatments that the Enchanted Island provided. She reasoned that her peace would only be realized once she escaped the brutal sexual assault meted out to her by Lobo everytime he visited the island. Lainey, being the daughter of a Texas senator and coming from a wealthy family, led a secret social life, which provided her with an escape from the strict and supervised life that her parents wanted for her. She, therefore, blackmailed her father's bodyguard and made him to give in to her demands and let her out of their compound.
The originality of this book is outstandingly what I liked about it. I enjoyed the use of local dialect in the book, which made the characters appear realistic and very original. The artistic beauty of this foreign vocabulary also made the book universally relatable because characters from different parts of the world would speak in their individual accents, which distinguished their backgrounds and assisted the author in creating a utopian world.
I enjoyed the captivating dialogues that characters indulged themselves with in the book. Coupled with flashback, SLMN cleverly allowed each character to narrate the events that led to their capture. The author's use of dream motif in retelling Bimala's capture after her subsequent confrontations with aunt Chaaya is worth commending as well. The suspense in the book is also well-developed and kept me on the edge of my seat with every page that I turned. I am absolutely positive that if the author considers my recommendation in the next revision of this book, the feedback received from readers will be incredible.
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It sure is a book for the toughest (in heart). Thank you for commenting.raluca_mihaila wrote: ↑27 Nov 2020, 16:56 It seems like a book for a tough audience, but I appreciated your thorough review. Great job!
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Thank you for the kind words.
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It's okay, I empathize with you. Thanks for your time.
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It sure is for the strong-willed. Thank you for the feedback.
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The prelude prepared me psychologically LOL
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I am truly grateful for your time in reading my review and providing feedback as well.SamaylaM wrote: ↑06 Dec 2020, 23:05 There are so many books written about sexual predation and child molestation that I liked you mentioned this book has outstanding originality. I'm not sure if I could stomach all those themes, but bravo to you for finishing and reviewing the book so thoroughly. Thanks for a great job!
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How I pray that you get the most out of your reading experience. Thank you for the feedback.