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Review of The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter

Posted: 12 Sep 2021, 13:55
by Alexandur Gicov
[Following is a volunteer review of "The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter" by Jordan David.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter is the fifth book of the series. Jordan David's Christmas series continues, but this time he surpasses himself and presents readers with over seven hundred pages. The action takes place around the elves and their significant and constant work. The story begins in the classroom, where the elves study and test their knowledge. Then the action is transferred around the various elves and their abilities and tasks. But this time someone else is in charge of the departments.

Jordan David's talent is incredible, and I can't hide and not note the fact that achieving so many pages after four published books is overwhelming. The continuation of the series gives us a re-look at the elves and their strengths and weaknesses. At the same time, the action around the main characters continues as new characters take part in the story. The enthusiasm with which Jordan David further develops this interesting Christmas story with splendid little elves, and of course, Santa Claus, is incredible. I liked The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter, and even that long, the story can be surprising.

The parts of which I am somewhat disappointed remain the same. Unnecessary moments and actions that did not add meaning to the basis of the story just stretched it and are unnecessary. Some parts were meaningless, as well as newly added characters who barely participated. The needing for editing continues to prevail, as there are spelling mistakes, and it becomes somewhat unpleasant for the reader.

But no matter what, the story is attractive and fascinating, and I can no doubt recommend it for any age. With that said, I can rate this book 3 out of 4. Why is that? Because I can't ignore the grammatical errors and the needing for proofreading. Some parts needed to be corrected and rewrite. That is why I can not give more. Also, in other words, you need to be consistent with the first four books of the series. Otherwise, you can’t get into The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter. Every human being who loves a Christmas, elves, and Santa would like this magical story. If you consider reading this series and especially, The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter, I hope to let satisfied with it. Even on the beach, you can indulge in this magical story with little sharp-eared creatures and their mission. Furthermore, enjoy the magic of reading it!

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The Elf Legacy - Book Five of the Magi Charter
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