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[Following is a volunteer review of "The Fox" by M. N. J. Butler.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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The Fox by M.N.J. Butler follows the life of the main character, Leotychides. He is the supposed son of King Agis II of Sparta, known as "the Cockerel". Sparta had two kings- Agiad and Eurynpotid. Leotychides hopes to become a Eurypontid king, but the circumstances surrounding his birth could cut his dream short. Then, it was normal for older men to require younger men help them bear strong sons. Leotychides became disappointed when he realized he was a product of such a tradition. King Agis II acknowledged Leotychides existence on his deathbed, and Leotychides, through this, hopes to succeed his father. However, his uncle, Agesilaus, ascends the throne, which sends Leotychides into a phase of disappointment. Would Leotychides be able to achieve his dream of becoming king?

In this historical fiction, M.N.J. Butler exhibits so much knowledge of Ancient Sparta and Greece history. The book is said to be a work of fiction, but the detailed description makes it seem real. In this book, we see a compromise of age-long traditional standards, as a result of Agesilaus' greed and selfish desire. Possessiveness and jealousy are also displayed by Timaia, Leotychides' mother. She wouldn't have her son display affection to other people. We see this when she sends away a maid because of how fond Leotychides was of her. This is a book about history, war and royalty.

I loved the humility of Leotychides. Although born into royalty, he decided to be raised with "the flock". When Spartan community boys became seven years of age, they were raised with the flock. We see Timaia reprimanding him, but Leotychides still acts as a normal Spartan would. He is dedicated to seeing Sparta united once more. It was interesting to know that his royal quest wasn't selfishly motivated. He fought to fulfill his promise to King Agis II, his late father.

Something I found useful was the glossary and list of characters. It helped me to understand the Greek and Spartan terms that were used in this book. It was commendable. In addition, this book reflected the ancient times and the Spartan ways. It was insightful to know what constituted victory in a war, what should be regarded as a compromise, and generally, the ways of the people.

As much as I found this book insightful, I felt bombarded with a whole lot of information. The list of characters was so long. Many times, I had to keep going back to check the characters because I lost track of the identities of some characters. I also felt like it was a bit too detailed, causing the book to be voluminous. I appreciate the descriptions, but some pieces of information could have been done without. I believe that this would have created an easy-to-read fiction. I'll rate this book 4 out of 4 stars. It was professionally edited and insightful. Though I had a problem with the list of characters, I can't fail to give the author credit for this historical masterpiece.

Once again, if you do not like history, you may want to skip this. I recommend this book to history lovers, especially people who are familiar with ancient Greece and Sparta.

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Although I would prefer a book with a small number of characters, I still think this book is a good read. Nice review
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Ritanuncia1 wrote: 18 Jan 2022, 04:56 Although I would prefer a book with a small number of characters, I still think this book is a good read. Nice review
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The author did great with developing so many characters,great review.
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I'm interested in Greek and Spartan history and indeed I found this book to be a great read too! Thanks for this review!
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Fine Brand wrote: 18 Jan 2022, 07:29 The author did great with developing so many characters,great review.
I think so too. Thanks for stopping by.
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DyanaFl wrote: 18 Jan 2022, 08:48 I'm interested in Greek and Spartan history and indeed I found this book to be a great read too! Thanks for this review!
Glad you liked it too. Thank you for the comment.
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I may not be a lover of history, but this character leotychides is one I would like to read about later, thanks for this review.
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Nan_Syl wrote: 19 Jan 2022, 02:23 I may not be a lover of history, but this character leotychides is one I would like to read about later, thanks for this review.
Thank you for your comment. I hope you enjoy reading about him.
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We should have more loyal noble blood. It's great to see a royal personality fight for the cause and unity of his territory. Awesome review.
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The long list of characters was overwhelming. Had to at some point, make a list of the characters, trying them to a particular event so that I couldn't forget.
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I truly enjoyed reading this review. It sounds like an amazing book! Although, I do not like many characters as well because I lost track too easily.
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This excellent review has called me to this story. Although I admit, I feel a little bit wary about the excessive characters mentioned in this review. Nevertheless I think this will be a good read. I am going to read this. :techie-studyingbrown:

Thanks for the honest review. :tiphat:
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Ritanuncia1 wrote: 18 Jan 2022, 04:56 Although I would prefer a book with a small number of characters, I still think this book is a good read. Nice review
I agree. I just picked up the book though and I have not yet gotten to the captivating parts.
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I love how the flock operated. It ended up raising Leotychides to become a great person. Thanks for the nice review.
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