Review by Jaime Lync -- The Nobel Prize by Mois benarroch

[Jaime Lync]

[Following is a volunteer review of "The Nobel Prize" by Mois benarroch.]

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3 out of 4 stars

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The Nobel Prize by award winning author Mois Benarroch captivates the reader from the first to the twenty- fifth (last) chapter chiefly by employing light humor while addressing the weighty subject of mental illness. This psychological thriller plunges us into the demented mind of a starving artist who just so happens to form a habit of visiting another institutionalized paranoid schizophrenic writer who impersonates a different character from one of his many published novels every day. The main character also meets a number of very peculiar supporting characters that serve to augment the reader’s intrigue in the novel while simultaneously advancing the plot. At the end of the book the reader is left wanting more and wondering who is who and what is what.

Benarroch’s conversational and witty writing style births desire in me to recount the story to others. However, I believe my retelling of the story would be my version as the novel is very open to the reader’s interpretation because it forces us to decipher between reality and delusions. The book opened with no table of content or acknowledgement just a page dedicated to an insightful and relevant quote. A table of content does not seem necessary because (a) the chapters are simply numbered, I liked this since most chapter titles act as spoilers, and (b) though there are twenty five chapters the average length of the chapters is two pages. The plot relied heavily on well composed dialogues. I especially enjoyed how the scenes and chapters flowed logically one into the other.

Moreover, though the central theme is mental illness the author also comments on other social themes. He speaks a lot on marital affairs. As for sexuality, he fringes around the topic. The well ‘fleshed-out’ characters also embody themes such as identity crisis, self-esteem, success and failure. All of these themes interwoven into the novel heighten the sense of suspense that is already attached to this genre of fictional work.

However, Mois’s work is not without cons. There are some editorial issues that sometimes baffle the reader. For example, female characters are sometimes referred to as males. Though these grammatical errors are few and far in between whenever they arise the reader is likely to get confused and have to re-read some portions to reclaim his bearing. The switch from dialogue to thoughts is also hard to distinguish at time because there are no quotation marks. Another con in my opinion is the use of curse words (I know many people that will not read a great book because the f-bomb is dropped). Moreover, Benarroch’s devoted a chapter to vividly paint a bizarre mature content scene that could have been disclosed briefly. The act of going into such graphic detail may serve as a ‘turn-off’ for many readers. I believe that this book would have been an even more enjoyable read if the grammatical errors and a specific obscene chapter did not make it onto the final draft of the novel.

In summary, The Nobel Prize is an enjoyable novel that could be enjoyed in one sitting and provoke thoughts on serious social issues for months. I rate this book 3 out of 4 stars because though I am highly inclined to recommend it to avid and non-avid readers alike there seems to be a lack of thorough editorial work as well as a scene that I would advise all to avoid. Overall, the novel is praiseworthy.

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[Pilar Guerrero]

Thank you for this detailed review. I read another book by the same author and I also commented on the dialogues, that it was hard to understand who is speaking. I think this author has developed a technique to include characters that are schizophrenic, paranoic or crazy. I have read other revies and the author also included a character that is not so sure about what happens in his mind or in the mind of others.

I think this can be a new and interesting type of literature, I like this author and his style, but I hope he can correct what more than one reviewer has suggested, the editorial and grammar mistakes.

[Vickyoreo86]

I love psychological thrillers and anything to do with the mind! Anything a little peculier is my cup of tea. I love the idea of this book and your review is very good and detailed.

Thank you

[Amagine]

What I loved most about this book was all of the author's quotes on writing. I would love to read a book by him just on that subject alone!

Great Review! ?

[Flor26]

The premise for this book seems quite intriguing. A story that inspires you to retell it - that's high praise. Great review.

[Jaime Lync]

Thanks everyone for the feedback. It has been a while since some of you posted so I am sorry for only expressing my gratitude now. I agree with all of you on the points you brought up: \
Pilar- indeed this can be a new and intriguing style if the work is better edited.
Vicky - I also am a fan of psychological thrillers.
Amagine - the quotes on writing was also my favourite part, especially since I am a hoping to write a novel myself. '
Flor- the premise is indeed awesome.

[General Doc]

I would definitely read this. Great review.

[Jaime Lync]

Thanks for the comment General Doc

[AuGold]

The graphic detail you mention really turns me off from this book. Thanks for sharing your review baby bro.

[Jaime Lync]

Yh, the graphic scene was really a minus in my book but being objective some people might like it.

[John Cand]

Nice review. This seems worth the read.

[Jaime Lync]

Thanks John for commenting on my review.