Review by Eniekko -- The 11.05 Murders by Brian O'Hare

[Eniekko]

[Following is a volunteer review of "The 11.05 Murders" by Brian O'Hare.]

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3 out of 4 stars

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Don’t we all make a mistake at one point in our lives? Is it so grave that one day, the consequence comes around and haunts you?

Newly promoted Woman Detective Sergeant Denise Stewart and the rest of the Serious Crimes team are called to investigate a murder case. Things get more serious when they realize that there is a very smart serial killer on the loose. Add to their already busy schedule is Denise’s newly acquired stalker who’s determined to get her and who’s more than ready to get rid of anyone who would even try to get close.

The 11:05 Murders by Brian O'Hare is a certified page turner which showcases good main characters, workplace drama and handling different ethical issues. Some of which I can list without giving so much away are the subject of rape, bullying and obsession.

I was both impressed and annoyed at the female lead character. But, mostly pleased because she is a tough nut in a work place where males are more predominant. Although she is very closed off at first, she eventually learns to trust again.

With so many things happening, there are a lot of suspects to choose from. The clues which are dropped makes readers point fingers to different characters. However, I do find some of the main character’s deduction a bit too far reaching. Especially at first when only a few hints has been dropped and she immediately connects it to a certain old photo.

There was a bit of disappointment on my part as well when one of the characters wasn’t given a proper introduction and then found out later that he holds a big part in the story. For me, it was underwhelming and didn’t do him much justice.

At some point, the atmosphere wasn’t that intriguing. I’m looking for that feeling wherein the readers are made to know that something bad is going to happen, just by reading the atmosphere. While reading the book, I only know that something unfortunate is going to occur through the character’s thoughts.
The quick head hopping is also confusing at times. One moment, I’m in Stewart’s head and then in the next instant, I’m in another Detective’s.

I give this book a solid 3 out of 4 stars just by being gripping and suspenseful. I had my main suspect in my mind and was quite surprised that I got the culprit right. However, this book is really good at throwing bits and pieces as to make you suspect someone else. What prevents me from giving this book a 4 are the inconsistencies I found, the quick head hopping and some typological errors.

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[Izesicle]

I am curious why you're also annoyed at the main character. Personally, I didn't like how she acted at the end. I rated the novel two out of four stars.

[Eniekko]

I am curious why you're also annoyed at the main character. Personally, I didn't like how she acted at the end. I rated the novel two out of four stars.

Hmmm...

I think I just don't like how her feminist side is easily triggered or how rude she reacts when someone steps in to help her.

[Mallory Whitaker]

I both liked and was annoyed by the main character as well. Like I think her character was great, just sort of inconsistent and hypocritical at times. For someone who hates being objectified she seemed to take in the appearance of every male she encountered and judge the book by its cover. But I did like her growth, learning to be a part of a team and trust the people around her.

[Eniekko]

I both liked and was annoyed by the main character as well. Like I think her character was great, just sort of inconsistent and hypocritical at times. For someone who hates being objectified she seemed to take in the appearance of every male she encountered and judge the book by its cover. But I did like her growth, learning to be a part of a team and trust the people around her.

Exactly!

[Donatelloo]

I love novels full of mystery,thriller and killings??? . Admirable review .

[Eniekko]

I love novels full of mystery,thriller and killings??? . Admirable review .

Thank you!

[LadyClaire]

wow!...a female lead character, suspense and mystery...this one's certainly caught my attention. Thanks for the in-depth review.