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[Following is a volunteer review of ""Dumb" Orphans" by Allan Low.]

Allan Low's use of the word dumb in the title of his book strongly bothered me because his book is marketed as a YA book. The author does explain in the first few pages that the orphans are called dumb by the community because they can't afford to go to school. Even though the leaders ironically end up being the dumb ones as they are manipulated by these clever children, the title continued to upset me. Putting the word in quotation marks did not alleviate the offensive connotation.

Despite my initial aversion, "Dumb" Orphans held my interest, and I can see its educational potential for the intended audience. The short chapters make this a perfect choice for a nightly read-aloud activity. The possibilities for deep discussions are limitless and should start with the inappropriate slur in the title. The book is a trilogy, but all three parts are in this one book.

Book I, "Aiyasha's Bottomless Briefcase," introduces a group of five to seven-year-old orphans and their caregiver, Aiyasha, who is fifteen. Their daily struggles to find food and exist without an adult supervisor remind me of the Boxcar Children series. The proverb, "Necessity is the mother of invention," is demonstrated beautifully as the group overcomes many obstacles. This part of the book is narrated by Sipho, one of the orphans.

Book II, "Aiyasha's Appeal," continues the story but is narrated by a different orphan, Elah. He escapes to England with Aiysha where they attend a boarding school. This section has a Harry Potter feel but without the magic.

Book III, "Aiyasha's Magical Legacy," continues Elah's narration as the Bundu Bunch completes their college education. All the orphans chose degrees that enhanced their unique special gifts. Their partnership helps them to fulfill Aiyahsa's goal of improving conditions in her country. This theme bears a resemblance to Cry the Beloved Country.

In addition to the negativity of the title, the timeline has some issues. The ages of the children are inconsistent with the plot line. Also, the reading level of Book III might be too advanced for the YA level of the other parts of the book.

The benefits of the book outweigh the negatives, however. The exposure to southern African culture, the moral lessons portrayed, and the importance of family earn a rating of five out of five stars. The book contains no grammar errors. The illustrations add to the understanding of each chapter and will be enjoyed by all readers.

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The review sounds nice. When I read the title, I initially thought it referred to people who are non-verbal or hearing impaired.

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I read this story that was so touching about how children's rights are taken for granted.
While the society takes pride in other issues that are of little or no value. Right now the world is riddled with so much moral decay murder rape to name but a few. If the plight of children could have been taken seriously right as early as possible By this I mean. Much love and care as possible. Children could have learned from early what love is and practice. All this problems seen right now could not have been serious as it is.

Lunar gate wrote: ↑30 Mar 2024, 00:17 The review sounds nice. When I read the title, I initially thought it referred to people who are non-verbal or hearing impaired.

I agree that the title is misleading. Thanks for your comment.

Calling orphans dumb because they can't go to school us heartless and cruel. I am so touched by this review and I think I will be more touched when I read the book. I enjoyed your review though.

As a former childcare provider, I realize that any sort of derogatory word directed at kids can cause permanent damage. The title of this book would probably keep a lot of the intended audience from picking it up no matter the contents. Thanks!

Risper Ouma Lisa Anyango wrote: ↑02 Apr 2024, 10:04 Calling orphans dumb because they can't go to school us heartless and cruel. I am so touched by this review and I think I will be more touched when I read the book. I enjoyed your review though.

Thank you for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my review.

Amy Luman wrote: ↑02 Apr 2024, 10:44 As a former childcare provider, I realize that any sort of derogatory word directed at kids can cause permanent damage. The title of this book would probably keep a lot of the intended audience from picking it up no matter the contents. Thanks!

Yes, Amy, I agree with you. It is hard to get past the title.

Yes, the title of the book is very offensive. The author gave a rich history of African culture which was great! My heart goes out to the orphans because they were mentally abused. Often, the orphans were teased by Meyego by calling the orphans "dumb" and making them feel like they are not important.

Allan Low's book title, "Dumb" Orphans, initially troubled me for YA readers, but the engaging story's educational value, cultural exposure, and moral lessons earned it a 5-star rating.

Ajain12 wrote: ↑11 Apr 2024, 01:06 Allan Low's book title, "Dumb" Orphans, initially troubled me for YA readers, but the engaging story's educational value, cultural exposure, and moral lessons earned it a 5-star rating.

I agree with you on the value of the book.

Loretta Morris 1 wrote: ↑10 Apr 2024, 15:47 Yes, the title of the book is very offensive. The author gave a rich history of African culture which was great! My heart goes out to the orphans because they were mentally abused. Often, the orphans were teased by Meyego by calling the orphans "dumb" and making them feel like they are not important.

I also enjoyed learning about African culture from reading this book. It was hard for me to realize that this story did not take place in the past.

Allan Low is a talented storyteller, and those stories, combined with childlike illustrations by Elizabeth Sparg, bring this tale to life. The horrors of the orphans living conditions and treatments are not sugarcoated but presented in a way that children will understand. The references to actual locations in Africa and England ground the trilogy in reality. This book is a powerful teaching tool with many lessons waiting to be unpacked. It is a beautiful account of a life that differs from my own experiences. I am grateful for this as it allows me to open my eyes beyond my little corner. This is what stuck with me the most. The vivid storytelling allowed me to use my imagination and transport myself to be with the orphans.

Dumb Orphans The Bundu Bunch Trilogy was almost to short. I wanted to know more about each of the orphans and connect all their experiences to the storyline. A book describing each of the orphans' successes, failures, and life adventures would result in an epic compilation much beyond this trilogy. The bunch seemed important to the storyline, but the reader only knows a small amount beyond descriptions.

I give Dumb Orphans The Bundu Bunch Trilogy a rating of 5 out of 5 stars. It is a beautiful children’s book, highlighting an often minimized world. The writing is relatable, easily understandable, and flows like a storyteller reading it around the campfire.

Dumb Orphans The Bundu Bunch Trilogy is a children’s book and thus is written for children. However, unlike many children’s books, this trilogy truly bridges the age gap and could and should be read by readers of all ages. It is one of those tales that will mean something different depending on a person’s life experienc

I read this story that was so touching about how children's rights are taken for granted.Calling orphans dumb because they can't go to school us heartless and cruel.The author gave a rich history of African culture which was great! My heart goes out to the orphans because they were mentally abused

The book ironically explores the struggles of growing up without parents and the zeal to overcoming subsequent challenge. It's through these difficulties that people of poor backgrounds described in the book achieve success.