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Immersive writing?

Posted: 14 Dec 2022, 22:48
by SoledadCanaria
Do you agree that Tina Dreffin's writing style in Bluewater Walkabout make the reader feel like they are experiencing the adventure alongside the author and her family?

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 25 Dec 2022, 00:45
by Jakub Bystrowski
Yes, I do. Her descriptions make you feel like you're there experiencing the moment with her.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 02 Jan 2023, 08:11
by Avishi
Yes, the images she included, as well as her writing style, give the impression that you are experiencing them alongside her.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 08 Feb 2023, 14:30
by Micheal Ukewuihe
Yes I believe that reading the book felt like I was a part of the story and enjoying the adventures with them.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 18 Feb 2023, 13:07
by Stephanie Stones
Of course, I felt that way in every aspect of the book. It felt like I was part of their adventure and a part of their family. I loved the lively adventures and everything about the book.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 10 Feb 2024, 06:14
by Andrew Darlington
Yeah I very much agree. I sat in my room and travelled round the world.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 04 Mar 2024, 11:24
by Lily Walker 1
I think that her descriptions were extremely immersive and I loved her use of literary devices to show the world through her eyes in a new way. However, sometimes I felt that it was kind of overdone, and I found myself zoning out and being pulled from the book. I think she had the right idea, but the execution wasn’t all the way there.

Re: Immersive writing?

Posted: 17 May 2024, 13:03
by Badger Martin
Her writing style was perfect, at some point when this book ,I felt I was in the story myself.