A story within a story
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I enjoyed sarah's story it was twisting at the first but when I got the pace it was sweet
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I'm with you Kat Kennedy on this one. I thought the language and the descriptive flow of Sarah's journey were amazing. I felt like I was on the journey too and I would love for there to be more of that in the future.Kat Kennedy wrote:I found myself more drawn to the story of Sarah's journey. I really wanted to learn more about her trip and the customs of the Native Americans, so I'm hoping there will be more coming in the sequel. The sadness of the losses they endured was so real! Well done.
I didn't have any issues with the transitions between the parts of the story and actually found it easier to sort out who everyone was in the camping story after the first narration of Sarah's vision. It took me a good while to sort out Tom and William within the camping story. It seemed easier as I went through the book.
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Sarah's part was the best. I want to read more.Snowflake wrote:I'm with you Kat Kennedy on this one. I thought the language and the descriptive flow of Sarah's journey were amazing. I felt like I was on the journey too and I would love for there to be more of that in the future.Kat Kennedy wrote:I found myself more drawn to the story of Sarah's journey. I really wanted to learn more about her trip and the customs of the Native Americans, so I'm hoping there will be more coming in the sequel. The sadness of the losses they endured was so real! Well done.
I didn't have any issues with the transitions between the parts of the story and actually found it easier to sort out who everyone was in the camping story after the first narration of Sarah's vision. It took me a good while to sort out Tom and William within the camping story. It seemed easier as I went through the book.
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