If you are given the chance to edit the ending of the story, how would you like it to end?
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Re: If you are given the chance to edit the ending of the story, how would you like it to end?
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Dolor wrote: ↑03 Jan 2018, 12:42You want to hear Rob's real experience meeting with renowned gurus and not just a mere mention to add to his book's credibility. Great idea!Gikonyo Caroline wrote: ↑03 Jan 2018, 11:23 I would have loved stories on the experiences Rob had when he met the renowned world gurus. Rob has done a good job at the introduction when he briefly states the impact these gurus had on his life but I believe he didn't do their meeting and his book due justice because he barely scratches the surface with the brief introductions. I think some of these encounters should have been documented as a chapter in the book to give his work more credibility and depth in content
I agree. It just left me completely unsatisfied and disappointed with the book.
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That phrasing really cheapens the message. The book builds up the idea of finding teachers everywhere in your life, and looking for the unexpected lessons, but then it sounds like he just wants to sell you something at the end. Really leaves you with a sour taste.Quartz wrote: ↑03 Jan 2018, 11:32 I did not like how he wrote in the epilogue to go to his page and "get a free pass to the front row of your life." To me, he didn't sound arrogant in the stories because he was learning lessons, but that last sentence really irked me because he did sound arrogant. Plus, he says to pay attention to unexpected "gurus" in your life, and he acts like he's trying to force himself to be an unexpected "guru."
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