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Re: If you are given the chance to edit the ending of the story, how would you like it to end?
Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 14:49
by HanElizabeth397
Strongbob25 wrote: ↑04 Feb 2018, 18:25
As others have noted here, I did not like how the book essentially ended on a sales pitch of "now go and ready my other books and maybe take a class with me too". It cheapened the entire book and also undercut the point he'd just spent several hundred pages making.
It just screamed 'sales tactic' and that wasn't really the point of the book. It could have been included in a seperate section after the chapters to say why the other books are useful so that people could read it if they wanted to
Re: If you are given the chance to edit the ending of the story, how would you like it to end?
Posted: 17 Feb 2024, 00:59
by Favy Moses
I agree that a contentment should be added because life is not all about money there are other valuable things too,our peace and true happiness is way more valuable than stolen money.
Re: If you are given the chance to edit the ending of the story, how would you like it to end?
Posted: 15 Mar 2024, 23:44
by Samuel Okoye 2
It was a great read for me, but i would like it if some of the authors remarks in the ending of the book are changed. The remark about listening to "unexpected gurus" didn't exactly go down well with me. Like someone pointed out, a line or two should have been dedicated to emphasising that one must not be a millionaire to be considered successful.