Transitions Between Time Periods
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Re: Transitions Between Time Periods
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She also probably had to do a lot of research, which probably took a lot of time and effort to make everything run together as smoothly as it did. I commend her for that!
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I agree with you Miriam! I also did not have any problems with the time period transitions because I thought that Belle Ami did a great job in indicating the dates and times during each transition.Miriam Molina wrote: ↑04 Jun 2018, 19:31 I had no problem going back and forth through time. I think it's the present day that was not given enough focus, specifically the threat posed by Scordato. The book spent too much time with Alex and Angela pleasuring each other.
Like you, however, I thought that the author could have paid more attention to Alex and Angela. Since this book is part of a series, we can hope that Ami will focus on the further development of the present-day characters.
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I agree.briellejee wrote: ↑06 Jun 2018, 03:16 The time travels were a bit of a slump. At first, I was fascinated but then it became a little messy.
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Overall, the author did a good job orchestrating the time jumps without hampering the flow of the plot.
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