Overall rating and opinion of "World, Incorporated" by Tom Gariffo
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "World, Incorporated" by Tom Gariffo
I didn't feel there was enough world building to get a good sense of how ordinary people lived. We get a glimpse, but it's mainly following Sliver, which isn't an ordinary life even for the setting of the book. In general, I can't imagine this happening in the future since we aren't given much to go by, just these articles that were more frustrating to read than anything else. They took away from the flow of the plot. There was several punctuation errors, and I personally didn't like the two different endings.
Overall, I gave the book a 2 out of 4 stars.
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The introductory chapters have a slow start. Too much information, too many introductions to characters and to a new world order. Maybe if it was done more organically throughout the story it would be better. Nevertheless, the story progresses well and builds momentum It’s quite an interesting take on what the future may look like. I really enjoyed the characters and the way they interact and grow in the story. It really is one of the stronger features in this book. Tom Gariffo does an excellent work building this dystopian world and introducing the reader to it. It’s not hard to understand how the world evolves into that setting and that makes it believable and relatable. A very good and entertaining read with something for everyone.