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Do you feel that the relationship between Paul and Rachelle added tension and excitement to the story, or did their interactions fall flat?

By the end of the book, I was so over them. The 'will they, won't they' got very boring. In the end, I was actually indifferent about their relationship.

I think it's a yay! Their relationship add something in the whole story. But I also think that it was kind of too much.

Like most fictional romance relationships, the author made them look like they were gonna last forever. I loved how they were featured in the book though, so yay for me!

The author's approach to romance didn't appeal to me, as I thought that there wasn't much chemistry.

I like a little romance in just about everything I read. So while reading the sample I was very excited to see that there was a possibly of a romance. I am defiantly rooting for them.

I think that it added a somewhat dramatical tension to the story.

Of course, love relations add excitement to the story, but as I have not read the full book so I cannot say anything about the relationship between Paul and Rachelle.

It felt forced, and predictable. The masked vigilante was the best part of this story, and I wish more was based off of that.

lesler wrote: ↑12 Dec 2018, 12:24 It felt forced, and predictable. The masked vigilante was the best part of this story, and I wish more was based off of that.

I agree. I thought the book would be more centered around the masked murderer and was disappointed that it wasn’t.

I thought this relationship fell flat. They were presented like preteens in their first relationship. I much preferred Deborah and Bud! Yay!

There was no real chemistry in the relationship. It was just flat.

I like the idea of them together, but it was nice that their relationship wasn't the main theme of the book.

According to me the relationship between Paul and Rachelle excitement to the story, I completely enjoyed it.

I didn't see anything wrong with their relationships. It was just common relationship likewise to those of other characters in the novel.