Flow of the Book and Development of Characters

[sayoniwrites]

The book has no flow or concrete plot. It moved like an untethered horse! The characters were not developed. Especially Cynthia!

[Inks and Quills]

Couldn’t have put it better myself. Curious what your thoughts are after reading the rest, but I didn’t think any of the errors you mentioned got better lol.

[Maris Charles M]

The plot was not engaging at all. And the characters were poorly developed.

[Agbata precious]

I didn't like most of the characters, the book was so annoying I couldn't just wait to finish it.

[Charless Agbata]

From what I have read so far, this book has allot of flaws. I hated this book from the moment Cynthia had an affair with Sky despite the fact that she was on a date with Dan. That act really underestimated her potential

[Moo Reny]

You are so correct! Sky's character is just annoying

[Chimezie Agbata]

I agree with you, Most characters were poorly developed especially for Sky who was everywhere. I think a more improved edition of this book should be published.

[Avishi]

Author mentioned the plotholes will be filled ine next sequel. Not only the character Sky even Dan is need some character development. Cynthia was clueless in many things. Sky and Dan was provocative and doubtful.

[Unique Mary Iloakasia]

The interwining of the two major plots was pooely done. I found myself losing interest at times. It didn't really flow well.

[Roderick Voss]

The flow of the plot was perfect but the character development of some characters wasn't excellent.

[Fentymak]

The book flowed well. Some characters like Dan and Sky weren't developed.

[Mercylib]

I won't rush into conclusions. But I hope I'd relate more to the characters as the book goes on. Not having read the rest of the series may play a role in my feeling there's more to the backstory than what's presented.

[Andrew Darlington]

Cynthia's character was poorly developed in the aspect of her relationship with Sky and Dan. A few other characters very also poorly develop. And yes, I very much agree there was an issue with the flow of this story.