Omg, the first chapters describing Sky were so creepy at times haha. I completely agree on thisAntonelaMaria wrote: ↑08 Jun 2019, 12:53 Well, I really didn't like the book so where should I start with the changes? I mean this is a big question. Probably would make Cynthia a bit stronger and smarter as a leading character and Sky less of a mr.know it all and creep.
What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?
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Re: What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?
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You've said it all. Also, the book cover page needs more work.
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