Overall rating and opinion of "Defining Moments of a Free Man from a Black Stream" by Dr Frank L Douglas.
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "Defining Moments of a Free Man from a Black Stream" by Dr Frank L Douglas.
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I am about half done reading the book. I am finding it difficult to read due to all the distractions. I am using an epub and the formatting of the pages is lacking. The header and footer (The title and author for the header, the page number for the footer) show up in the middle of pages and sometimes in the middle of a sentence. It makes for very choppy reading. I also have noticed the hyphens and the capitalized letters and wondered why.Nym182 wrote: ↑06 Jul 2019, 09:35 As of now, I am about 20% done with "Defining Moments of a Free Man from a Black Stream" and I have run across several differences examples of grammar (for lack of a better term) that I believe to be cultural. For example, Douglas hyphenates words that shouldn't be hyphenated (ex. infin-itesimal on pg 62) and capitalizes some nouns (such Pregnancy on pg 64). I know the capitalizing of nouns is found in German grammar, but i have never seen an author use hyphens in the same way.
At first I found this a little confusing, but I was able to quickly re-calibrate myself... Which brings to me wonder if other have had the same issue? I do enjoy the unique way Douglas writes, and I wonder if there are other books that have these little culture grammar bombs? And how else does one's culture effect how one writes?.
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I believe formatting issues are part of what led to the weird hyphenation in words as well. My guess is is that in the actual print version, those words were at the end/beginning of lines, which is why they were hyphenated. But that was not the case in the e-book version.
In addition, given all the punctuation and capitalization errors, I thought that it was possible that English was not the author's first language. And maybe it is not, but it is the official language of Guyana.
Honestly, I had to stop tracking all the errors I found, or I was never going to finish reading the book. At the start, it felt like I was spending more time noting the errors than I was reading the story.
All of that said, I do think this is an important story to hear (which is why I wish there had been an audio version). We often want to think that the discrimination that minorities, and especially blacks, in the US faced in the 1960s is gone, but it is not. It is just hidden a bit more. It can be hard to hear our culture called out, but it is necessary.
Still, I found it odd that the author said he wrote this book for his family, and yet there was almost no mention of his family. He mentioned getting engaged. And then the next time he mentioned his family, he had gotten married and had two young kids. I was surprised he never even mentioned when he got married or moving his wife to the US from Guyana.
I appreciate that he loved his mother, but he spent more time telling us about her death than he did saying anything about his children or wife.
I still have my full review to write, but I will be giving this book 2 stars. It would be 3 stars, but the formatting, grammatical, and editing errors make the book difficult enough to read that I have to lower the score by a full star.
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