The Ending
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The Ending
Did you like the plot twist at the end? Were you surprised by the killer's identity? I was!
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I wasnt all that impressed
The climactic scene at the end answered all the lingering questions but the last few chapters after that felt a little rushed to get in some last minute details. I also dont really think Tear was all that important of a character to revisit.
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I thought the author did a good job of ending the book. It didn't feel too rushed. While I do have some questions still, I agree that she did a good job of tying up loose ends, but she left enough questions to keep readers interested in another book. I wasn't surprised by the killer's identity, but I still love the way Pellucid wove the story together.gali wrote: ↑31 Aug 2019, 23:03 What did you think about the ending? Did you feel that the resolution came too quickly? I thought it was ok and liked that the author tied all loose ends while leaving room to a sequel.
Did you like the plot twist at the end? Were you surprised by the killer's identity? I was!
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I agree. I think a bit of the princes POV would have been a fun way to change the story a bit as well as build his character. The prince wasn't a very strong supporting character. Especially for as "important" as he wasTomah wrote: ↑01 Sep 2019, 13:50 Overall, I enjoyed the ending. I can't say I was all that surprised about the twist, but it was well-executed. I didn't really like the false king's confrontation with Will as it felt too late for me to care about the man. Sure, he was the one responsible for most of the problems in the kingdom, but I was never particularly invested in him. This could've been fixed by some chapters from the prince's point of view, which would also do wonders to build the prince himself more as a character.
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I was surprised by the plot twist at the end and I hope the author covers alot in the sequel.gali wrote: ↑31 Aug 2019, 23:03 What did you think about the ending? Did you feel that the resolution came too quickly? I thought it was ok and liked that the author tied all loose ends while leaving room to a sequel.
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I didn't have any problem with the ending. The book had a good end. There might be a sequel, though.gali wrote: ↑31 Aug 2019, 23:03 What did you think about the ending? Did you feel that the resolution came too quickly? I thought it was ok and liked that the author tied all loose ends while leaving room to a sequel.
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I think there could be a sequel with how she ended the bookNuel Ukah wrote: ↑22 Sep 2019, 01:35I didn't have any problem with the ending. The book had a good end. There might be a sequel, though.gali wrote: ↑31 Aug 2019, 23:03 What did you think about the ending? Did you feel that the resolution came too quickly? I thought it was ok and liked that the author tied all loose ends while leaving room to a sequel.
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Emmy's PoV promised more adventures with Will and hopefully the author picks that as the sequel.Kro92813 wrote: ↑22 Sep 2019, 12:10I think there could be a sequel with how she ended the bookNuel Ukah wrote: ↑22 Sep 2019, 01:35I didn't have any problem with the ending. The book had a good end. There might be a sequel, though.gali wrote: ↑31 Aug 2019, 23:03 What did you think about the ending? Did you feel that the resolution came too quickly? I thought it was ok and liked that the author tied all loose ends while leaving room to a sequel.
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