Point of view
- Akpome1
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Re: Point of view
- nchoate12
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I thought it was odd of the author to include herself as a character.wordslinger42 wrote: ↑11 Sep 2019, 09:51 I think I would choose Dew Pellucid. For me, her character needed some more development. I felt that Pellucid has a lot of potential as a character, and reading the story from her point of view would add a lot to the story and provide some insight into her character!
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- wordslinger42
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I can see why you would feel that way! I think it would have worked better if her character had had more development and readers were given hints as to why it's significant that the author and a character are one and the same. But as the story stands, it does seem kind of random and out of place.thaservices1 wrote: ↑03 Nov 2019, 15:56I thought it was odd of the author to include herself as a character.wordslinger42 wrote: ↑11 Sep 2019, 09:51 I think I would choose Dew Pellucid. For me, her character needed some more development. I felt that Pellucid has a lot of potential as a character, and reading the story from her point of view would add a lot to the story and provide some insight into her character!
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