Overall rating and opinion of "Opaque" by Calix Leigh-Reign
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "Opaque" by Calix Leigh-Reign
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Oh I understand now. Most people would call that a toxic relationship when they feel they can be the saving grace of someone else. In real life, they may get burned more than a few times trying to do that.Rayasaurus wrote: ↑03 Mar 2020, 15:57I’ve never been fond of the sort of woman saves man from his own darkness through a romantic relationship trope because of the way it seems to never really work out in real life, but it’s just my personal preference. Adam is quite unstable and dangerous at the beginning of the novel, so I feel like it was a bad decision for Carly to get involved with him romantically at that time.Moray_001 wrote: ↑03 Mar 2020, 02:38I’m curious, why did you feel that their relationship wasn’t a good aspect?Rayasaurus wrote: ↑01 Feb 2020, 13:00 I really liked this book overall, especially Adam's character development. His relationship with Carly (at least looking at it from Carly's perspective) wasn't my favorite, but it still made sense for the story. I rated it a 3 star book, but I would definitely recommend it to teenagers and young adults.
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This was my overall impression of the book as well. It was exciting to watch Adam and Carly grow closer to each other. As well as Adam mature.
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I haven’t finished yet, but am pushing through. I cannot get past how Leigh-Reign uses adverbs and adjectives like she’s back in the time of Dickens and is getting paid by the word. There are entire paragraphs that don’t even contain any verbs, they’re just full of descriptions of clothing, how every teenage girl in the town except Carly has a boob job, and how Carly has a huge “heart-shaped fanny.”
Add the protagonist having an oedipus complex, kidnapping a girl and taking her to his rape dungeon, and referring to people as animals and you have the entire character development (not really spoilers, you get all this information by the end of chapter 2).
Later, add in how instead of emphasizing a Russian accent like a normal author would, just writing it phonetically, she makes use of the Cyrillic alphabet. She seems to want to ostracize the reader.
It’s the weirdest rip-off of Edward Cullen with a 50 Shades-type fantasy liking to think he has the powers of the Force that I’ve ever come across.
Maybe my opinion will change once I make it through, but I doubt it and the severe need for edits isn’t helping.
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