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Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 18 May 2020, 23:24
by OJ Duogo
Mixing of past and present tense bothered me a little as I am not an English native speaker.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 19 May 2020, 05:36
by HusseinJ
I personally was not bothered by the mixing of the tenses. In my view it brought out a twisting feeling of the language while reading. This made it interesting.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 23 May 2020, 04:43
by Wordlessly
I realise that it's a matter of personal preference but I find books written in present tense extremely difficult to read. Additionally, I don't think the mixing of tenses helped the flow of this story as I already found it quite choppy.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 26 May 2020, 01:56
by Barbara Larkin
I don't mind a story being told in the present tense. If the author feels that's the best way to relay their story, it's up to them. I do dislike when the tenses are mixed up, however. If it's done to accommodate a flashback or some other such story element then sure, why not?

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 05 Jun 2020, 13:04
by VivianLove
For me reading in the present tense takes a bit to get used to, especially in a novel. But I think it's more poetic than the past tense!

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 20 Jun 2020, 06:45
by sarahmarie181
I find mixed tense done well, lends something a little more of intrigue to a book, it has to flow though. Mixed tense poorly done can jar and interrupt the enjoyment of the narrative.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 23 Jun 2020, 02:18
by Sally_Heart
Mixing of tenses can be an art if you know how to do it well. Though I do find it jarring to read a book in first tense.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 24 Jun 2020, 19:54
by banevius
I didn't think anything of it. I thought everything flowed smoothly. It was a bit different because, as someone already mentioned, many stories are written in past tense. But I thought the present tense was fine here, so long as the reader doesn't get too hung up on that aspect.

Re: Present Tense and Writing Style

Posted: 01 Mar 2024, 03:44
by Samuel Okoye 2
I honestly didn't find the authors writing style and tenses incongruous at all. I guess it's because I've read other books written in a similar way.