Official Review: The Neighbour at Number 18

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Re: Official Review: The Neighbour at Number 18

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Thanks for the review. I honestly couldn’t tell where the story was going from the sample I read. The plot described in this review sounds interesting, but, based on the sample, this book needs serious editing.
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It sounds like this book had promise but the author maybe bit off more than she could chew. I don't think this is one I'd enjoy. Thanks for your honest review!
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This book seemed to have a lot of potential, but due to the numerous errors the story suffered immensely. I think that the lessons that are incorporated into this book are good for teenagers and young adults to learn in order to protect themselves from danger. I am a little disappointed about the disorganization of the book, but hopefully with your review the final product can be improved.
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This seems an insightful read, if impossible to read by those who would most benefit from it.

Thank you for the review!
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Despite the obvious lack of proofreading, I do appreciate the plot of the story. I would have loved to read but a poorly edited book is a turn off for me. I will pass on this based on the review.
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Sounds like a great book with marvelous lessons to learn. I would love to know who killed Tyler in prison. Thanks for an amazing review of the book. You convinced me about reading it. Congratulations BOTD.
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It sounds like an interesting book but the inconsistency will be quite annoying.
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'The neighbour at Number 18" by Hawa Crickmore is a novel that tells the story of the main character Maria and her relationships with two women and two men. The writer seeks to demonstrate a real life situation in this book and the many challenges that you would faced in a life's situation. The writer uses graphic descriptions to bring out the emotion which is felt by the main characters in this book.
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This book review is very good and will attract the reader in purchasing this book .
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Wow this book sounds like one that would have been a suspense filled drama. Thankfully, it contains lessons on how to recognize SSR. Congratulations
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good review
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This sounds like it could be a captivating read. I hope the editing errors are looked into. Thanks for sharing.
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The neighbour at number 18 suddenly appear and instantly becomes something to worry about. It's a good book to loot at. Thanks for the review.
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The neighbour at number 18 is a great book with important social norms that must be looked into that was why I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. However, I believe the book will be much better if it is professionally edited. It is a great book. Great and informative review!
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There’s seems to be a lot of emotion in this story. Although, I may have to skip it since it seems so unorganized.
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