Review of The Power of God Changes All
Posted: 21 Nov 2022, 12:36
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Power of God Changes All" by Stephanie Styrcula.]
Stephanie Styrcula's young adult/adult fiction book, Power of God Changes All, is set in the late 1950s and early 1960s. Mai'Lena Madison's parents are Luke and LingLing. They first came into contact when Luke, a soldier serving in Japan during World War II, saved LingLing from being assaulted. In a Brooklyn school where every student is white, Mai'Lena Madison is referred to as a “colored girl.” She was raised in the Lord's way, and Amanda Maller is her best friend. The white kids constantly harass Mai'Lena, Amanda, and the other minority children. They think mixed-race people have no place among them. All of these things persisted until Jacob, one of the school's popular white jocks, was confronted by Amanda. The white children began to respect the mixed-race children as a result.
There was a new person at their school one day. He is Jerry Mallette, and he is also Jacob's friend. He exhibited an affinity for Mai'Lena. Jacob, on the other hand, is also attempting to date Amanda romantically. Mai'Lena, will you consent to date him? When these guys enter Mai'Lena and Amanda's lives, will they still be able to uphold their beliefs and principles?
I enjoyed a few elements of this book. The first is Mai'Lena and Amanda's friendship and mutual understanding. Given that kids attend a school where there are numerous bullies, I appreciate how supportive they are of one another and how willing they are to defend one another. Likewise, I appreciate how kind and devoted their parents are to them. A parent's relationship with their children should be positive and strong.
On the other hand, I thought many things about this place were objectionable. First off, the book's title, cover, and context are unrelated. Actually, I don't see how The Power of God Changes All, the novel's title makes connections between racism, bullies, and youthful marriage. Few in-depth talks of God and church activities were included at the beginning of the novel, when the author was still portraying the main characters and their boyfriends. A better title and cover for this kind of plot, in my opinion, could have been made.
Additionally, the book claims that these females were raised in God's ways. At first, they portray that facet of the character, but all of a sudden, it changes. I find it very sensitive that this book seems to be trying to promote adolescent marriage and pregnancy. When the parents found out that their fourteen-year-old was pregnant and would become a mother at fifteen, they did not even take sufficient measures. There were too many extraneous details, asides, and digressions. As a result, the book became tediously long. I found this to be a dull read, which is why it took me so long to finish. A person's attention span is limited. The chapters were all too long. I believe there was a more effective approach to accomplishing that.
Finally, I discovered too many mistakes to argue that this was not properly edited. Grammar and punctuation mistakes were present. I give this 2 out of 5 stars for the aforementioned reasons. This story has more things I loathe about it than I like.
I'll recommend it to readers who enjoy Christian fiction. This isn't very religious. Its subject matter is more appropriate for an older audience.
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The Power of God Changes All
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Stephanie Styrcula's young adult/adult fiction book, Power of God Changes All, is set in the late 1950s and early 1960s. Mai'Lena Madison's parents are Luke and LingLing. They first came into contact when Luke, a soldier serving in Japan during World War II, saved LingLing from being assaulted. In a Brooklyn school where every student is white, Mai'Lena Madison is referred to as a “colored girl.” She was raised in the Lord's way, and Amanda Maller is her best friend. The white kids constantly harass Mai'Lena, Amanda, and the other minority children. They think mixed-race people have no place among them. All of these things persisted until Jacob, one of the school's popular white jocks, was confronted by Amanda. The white children began to respect the mixed-race children as a result.
There was a new person at their school one day. He is Jerry Mallette, and he is also Jacob's friend. He exhibited an affinity for Mai'Lena. Jacob, on the other hand, is also attempting to date Amanda romantically. Mai'Lena, will you consent to date him? When these guys enter Mai'Lena and Amanda's lives, will they still be able to uphold their beliefs and principles?
I enjoyed a few elements of this book. The first is Mai'Lena and Amanda's friendship and mutual understanding. Given that kids attend a school where there are numerous bullies, I appreciate how supportive they are of one another and how willing they are to defend one another. Likewise, I appreciate how kind and devoted their parents are to them. A parent's relationship with their children should be positive and strong.
On the other hand, I thought many things about this place were objectionable. First off, the book's title, cover, and context are unrelated. Actually, I don't see how The Power of God Changes All, the novel's title makes connections between racism, bullies, and youthful marriage. Few in-depth talks of God and church activities were included at the beginning of the novel, when the author was still portraying the main characters and their boyfriends. A better title and cover for this kind of plot, in my opinion, could have been made.
Additionally, the book claims that these females were raised in God's ways. At first, they portray that facet of the character, but all of a sudden, it changes. I find it very sensitive that this book seems to be trying to promote adolescent marriage and pregnancy. When the parents found out that their fourteen-year-old was pregnant and would become a mother at fifteen, they did not even take sufficient measures. There were too many extraneous details, asides, and digressions. As a result, the book became tediously long. I found this to be a dull read, which is why it took me so long to finish. A person's attention span is limited. The chapters were all too long. I believe there was a more effective approach to accomplishing that.
Finally, I discovered too many mistakes to argue that this was not properly edited. Grammar and punctuation mistakes were present. I give this 2 out of 5 stars for the aforementioned reasons. This story has more things I loathe about it than I like.
I'll recommend it to readers who enjoy Christian fiction. This isn't very religious. Its subject matter is more appropriate for an older audience.
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The Power of God Changes All
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon