Review of The End of May

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Prince Oyedeji Oyeleke Jayeola
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Review of The End of May

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The End of May" by Kem Richards.]
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5 out of 5 stars
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The End of May by Kem Richards is a compassionate fiction story that describes a lifestyle of abusive relationships, drugs, and prostitution. Marcella Burke moved from Ohio to New York City to start her life; she was to stay with her boyfriend, Luke. A few days after arriving in New York, her best friend, Jessica, visited her. Marcy and Jess went to 230 Fifth, where Marcy met David. They both shared chemistry, and affection began to flow as they chatted. David networked with Marcy to secure a job at Vogue with Mrs. Price. This was the beginning of Marcy's escapades in New York City. Find out in this book what these escapades were and how she fared.

I like the plot development and writing pace. The turn between Marcy and Luke was expected, but I didn't see Rafael Leon coming into the picture either. Maybe because he shared so many traits with her father, but sad enough, she lost her father. Marcella's courage after being denied the job at Vogue was intriguing. She was resolute in proving her worth to Mrs. Price. Courage is the virtue that gave her a second chance. The author is well-detailed in his explanations and provides adequate information to support every incident. I like the author's approach to selecting titles for each chapter; the titles reflect what to expect from the chapter. The story's conclusion is well organized and shows a great deal of rehabilitation.

Although I wouldn't say I liked the event that played out between Marcy and Luke when Abby accompanied her to Luke’s apartment, it is not enough to strike out the story's uniqueness. 

The book was professionally edited and is such an exciting read and I rate it five out of five stars. Marcy made a lot of mistakes, and those choices affected her life and career. Her story is a good read for both young and adult readers. I recommend the book to fiction romance lovers and anyone interested in reading an exciting narrative.

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Post by Christabel Ify Benson »

It's great to hear that the book is well-edited, and there were no errors that detracted from your reading experience. This is crucial in a book, and I'm glad to know that the author has taken care in this regard.
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Kem Richards choice of including a title olfor each new chapter is really a brilliant idea. I also commend the way you highlighted your likes about the book. This is a great review!
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Your enthusiasm for the book spreads quickly. I'm interested in this book because of your enthusiasm for the plot and characters.
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Reading that Marcy made a lot of mistakes make this more suitable for young adults who are just starting their lives, so they will know how things would turn out if they make such mistake. Well done!
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There are always consequences for every actions taken. I am not a fan of the genre of the book, but I like the fact that it addresses the issue of abuse. Your review well summarized the book. Welldone.
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The End of May" by Kem Richards is a compassionate fiction story that delves into the challenging and dark aspects of abusive relationships, drugs, and prostitution. The protagonist, Marcella Burke, moves from Ohio to New York City with the intention of starting a new life with her boyfriend, Luke. However, her journey takes a different turn when her best friend, Jessica, visits her in New York. During their visit to a place called 230 Fifth, Marcy encounters David, with whom she shares a deep connection and affection. David helps Marcy secure a job at Vogue through his networking with Mrs. Price, which sets the stage for Marcy's experiences and escapades in the city.
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The title of the book is really catchy. It has a nice storyline
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Marcella's courage and determination to prove herself after being denied the job at Vogue is admirable. It's always inspiring to see characters who persevere in the face of challenges.
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This book seems to give an enjoyable read about romantic drama and relationship. I hope to enjoy its romantic element and the suspenseful plot.
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