Review of Do Not Disturb

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Review of Do Not Disturb

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Do Not Disturb" by Senoj.]
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5 out of 5 stars
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In Do Not Disturb: An Erotica Poem Collection, Senoj captures different shades of passion, fantasies, and raw sexual performances. Narrated from the first-person point of view, readers meet the lovers one-on-one as they get lost in each other in various positions and grind to exhaustion.

This erotica poetry collection stretches the readers' minds to the possibilities, and even the extremes, of sensual and sexual escapades. The vibrations of excited genitals, the desperate moves, the varied styles, the eventual pleasurable rush, and other emotional states are vividly portrayed and garnished with relevant imagery.

Senoj impressed me with his word choices, which he so carefully made to create a desired scene or emotion. Take, for instance, his use of shaft, hardened flesh, staff, piece, it, and pen to refer to the penis to meet the taste of various contexts in the poems. The same thing was done with the vagina, which was given the following tags: juicy wet box, pink rose, stream, and forbidden fruit.

The poems are embellished with relevant poetic devices. I could visualise the romantic scenes, and I must admit, some of those scenes "shook" me violently. Some onomatopoeic words, like "sucking and slurping," can even make one hear the performances in one's mind's eyes.

Some of the romantic scenes are illustrated. The poems are all amazing, and the author's skilful use of words to capture even the minute scene of a "passionate contact" is impressive. I especially admired the creativity that went into the poem titled "Long Story."

This book was well edited. The minor grammatical issues I came across could be intentional since this is a poetry work. I didn't dislike anything in this book, and I am delighted to rate it five out of five stars based on the aforementioned positive aspects.

Finally, I recommend this poetry collection to married couples. The poems will always ignite in them the fire they need to have a great moment with themselves. Singles who like to read love poems may also consider this book, but they should be careful not to lose self-control. I do not recommend this book to teenagers, given the heavy sexual scenes in it.

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