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Re: What would you change?
Posted: 03 Jul 2020, 09:46
by Pendrick reckon
The author has come with some thing so special. I really like this book and I'd like to read more. Congrats to author.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 09 Jul 2020, 04:26
by A Y reviews
I wouldnt change anything really. But I would have reduced the size. The book is voluminous
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 17 Jul 2020, 05:43
by Ify_Reviewer
I don't think we should be concerned about changing anything in the book. It is a work of fiction, beautifully crafted out of the author's imagination.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 20 Jul 2020, 07:18
by Alexandros92
Maybe make more detailed descriptions of the way of life back then. There are a lot of questions about how they survived and such.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 20 Jul 2020, 08:30
by tanner87cbs
I would of given more depth of the story to Adam and Eve in the beginning.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 20 Jul 2020, 13:27
by Divergent fire
I didn't find anything in the book to be replaced. I love the book for the way it's written.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 22 Jul 2020, 20:14
by Cyrus Michino
The book is fictional, it draws religious scriptures from the Bible and gives them a twist. Those trying to learn theology, this is definitely not your best choice. I believe that actual Biblical scriptures should not be mixed with fictional twists.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 07 Aug 2020, 09:51
by plnjimenez
spencermack wrote: ↑01 Jun 2020, 23:29
It's a work of fiction so different readers will carry different understandings. Every book can confirm biases or help people change. Depends on the person.
Yes. The same story can have different interpretations and impact on individuals.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 07 Aug 2020, 19:20
by Kanda_theGreat
I think I would change the character development of the giants who were cotracted to build the ark. It felt so unfair that each of their subsequent births led to the deaths of their mothers. This is to say that I would give Eve a more 'honourable' death.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 08 Aug 2020, 17:26
by MuthoniMuriithi
I would have changed the point of view from fictional understanding of the verses to a concrete faith based perspective.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 04 Sep 2020, 10:58
by Laura Mich
Some of the actions God imposed on His people came as a surprise. If I were to change anything from the book, I would change actions that came as surprise to God. I believe God is supposed to be all-knowing.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 22 Nov 2020, 17:32
by zainherb
I would not change anything.
The book is from the author's viewpoint.
Let it be enjoyed as that.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 14 Feb 2022, 06:53
by Chinazo Anozie
Samisah wrote: ↑01 Jun 2020, 11:31
The book gives a fiction version of the biblical story of the book of Genesis. It is well written and has a lot to offer. However, readers must understand that it is the author's perspectives that were given in the book.
So I guess i wanted wanted to ask those who have read the book if there are narratives they didn't like or felt out of place. If yes, how would you have rather written it?
There were a lot. I didn't agree with the author's portrayal of Cain as beyond redemption, or the Nephilim as dimwitted giants.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 28 Feb 2022, 04:34
by Janet Kimetto
I'd change the way the Nephilim were portrayed. I really wanted Cain to repent in the end, but I'd leave that part as it is.
Re: What would you change?
Posted: 12 Apr 2022, 11:39
by Bennaji
I think what I would change is the author's over-exaggerations on some issues. Like the Cain's mark and what it did.