Review of Legends of the pack lands

[Boye Emmanuel]

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Legends of the pack lands" by Leonard M Parker.]

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3 out of 5 stars

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A story of fate, of the strongest, endless battles, a fight to win or get finished. Muddy the slave was an orphan who toiled in the mud, bound in chains alongside his uncle. He nearly met his demise at the hands of his abusive uncle but was saved by Elmo of Sharo, who was from a different land. His new benefactor took an inexplicable interest in him and told his daughter to train him.

Five years of training lay ahead; failing to prove himself meant facing death, but success meant survival."
However, beyond passing his master's test, more challenges await him. Legends of the Pack Lands by Leonard M Parker takes you deep into Muddy's transformation into Aaron of Sharo, immersing you in a thrilling adventure from beginning to end.

I was captivated by the book from the very first page. I appreciate the narrative of his evolution from a slave boy to a formidable Titan on the brink of a grand destiny. The story was a compelling and engaging read that won my admiration. The vivid descriptions of the events in the book particularly stood out. I could vividly imagine the intense war scenes, the creation of various weapons with sand and wind, and the use of the inherited whip. The story imparts valuable lessons about responsibility and loyalty. Reading this book has transformed me into a fan of sci-fi literature, and I eagerly anticipate reading more works by the author. While the author didn't explicitly mention a sequel, I believe the story's conclusion hints at more thrilling action to come.

However, despite enjoying the anecdote, the book suffered from poor editing. Nearly every page contained errors, which detracted from the overall reading experience. I strongly recommend that the author enlist the services of a professional editor to rectify these issues. Once the editing is complete, this book has the potential to compete for awards in its genre and could even be adapted into an engaging movie.

I rate the book 3 out of 5 stars, primarily due to the numerous editing concerns. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly recommend it to enthusiasts of sci-fi/fantasy and action-packed books.

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[Susan John Peter]

Muddy's journey from a slave to a powerful figure in 'Legends of the Pack Lands' is truly inspiring. The author's ability to describe the transformation is remarkable, making it easy for readers to connect with the character. The action-packed scenes and unique world-building had me hooked from the start. I can't wait to see what the author has in store for future works!"

[NetMassimo]

A classic basic idea that transcend genres is used to start what seems like an engaging story whose enjoyment is hindered by the many mistakes, so I hope the author does proper proofreading to make it excellent. Thank you for your great review!