Review of WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings

Vine Michael · Post by **Vine Michael** » 25 Sep 2022, 11:46

I’m quite disappointed that the book has so much errors. If not for these errors it seems to have been a nice book.

tortle0o0 · Post by **tortle0o0** » 25 Sep 2022, 11:54

I sincerely hope that this author has taken the time to use your feedback constructively. I would love to see some strong improvements made in regard to the editing. In the meantime, this plot does sound interesting (I'm a sucker for an apocalypse storyline!)

Post by **Yulisa Sanchez** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:00

Personally, I am a fan of apocalyptic books and the premise of this novel definitely sounds like a great read. I'm curious to know what Kaarina's and Monty's special abilities are and if they manage to reach safety while being hunted. I hope the book gets better editing before I read it. Congrats on the BOTD!

AntonelaMaria · Post by **AntonelaMaria** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:03

I am not a sci-fi reader. It is bad that the book has so many errors. I will skip it for now but I like the cover.

Kenesha Latoya Fowler · Post by **Kenesha Latoya Fowler** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:15

I was at once curious about the rating, having seen that this was BOTM earlier this year. But after reading your review, I understand. I would have hated to read a book that was so carelessly put together, and probably wouldn't not have had the patience to guess and figure stuff out while reading. Thank you for plowing through and giving an honest review.

Fajarr · Post by **Fajarr** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:26

Seems like an interesting plot! Congrats on Botd!

Fajarr · Post by **Fajarr** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:27

Seems like an interesting plot. Congrats on BOTD!

Jorge Leon Salazar · Post by **Jorge Leon Salazar** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:28

The plot around the cybernetic chip that cures diseases and if Kaarina and Monty manage to join the Berserkers Guild seems interesting. Also, the characters' development and demographic descriptions are engaging. However, the book seems to have a lot of editing details to fix in future rounds of proofreading.

Rohit Khanna · Post by **Rohit Khanna** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:35

The plot is really intriguing and promising. It's a shame if the book is filled with editing errors as it can be detrimental to the reading experience. Thanks for the detailed review!

María Andrea Fernández Sepúlveda · 25 Sep 2022, 12:37

It's baffling that an author that paid attention to minute details such as different typography fro memories and dialogues overlooked other much more important aspects that led you to rate this book so low.
The premise seems original, so I hope the author considers improving the aspects you mentioned.

kiki2881 · Post by **kiki2881** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:46

I love Mike Juniors' dedication in making every character three dimensional in this novel. The xyz gotta mean something

Post by **Kirsi Cultrera** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:53

This book is undoubtedly too scary for me. I don't want to read anything about chips, altered DNA, or abnormals with special abilities. I also don't think I would enjoy a book with so many grammatical or formatting problems, as that sort of thing tends to take my concentration off the story.

Thank you for the lovely and truthful review!

Post by **Kajori Sheryl Paul** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:58

Kaarina and Monty seem to be special individuals with unique talents. Your description of the Dead Zone intrigued me.

Thank you for the great review.

Laura Ungureanu · Post by **Laura Ungureanu** » 25 Sep 2022, 12:59

I'm interested in this plot and I like the world-building. However, the numerous negative points mentioned in the OBC review make me reluctant. I think I will skip this book, but congrats!

Post by **Lindiwe Chakhala** » 25 Sep 2022, 13:00

Thank you for a thorough and honest review. I will have to pass on this book as I am not a fan of science fiction. The grammatical errors would also make it difficult for me to connect to the story. I hope others enjoy it once corrections are made to the book. Congrats on BOTD.