Official Review: The Last Lumenian by S.G. Blaise
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It was riddled with dramatic pauses, along with grammatical errors, which distracted from the flow of the story.
An example of this can be seen on the second page of the first chapter:
The abrupt jumps within the chapter without context and sometimes from chapter to chapter also contributed to my confusion as there were spots that needed more than just the plain descriptions in order for the picture to be painted clearly.He brushes my hands to the side. Off the stubborn harness buckles. With a click the restraints cutting into me disappear.
Henceforth, I am of the opinion from the sample provided that the book does not deserve four out of four stars but instead should be at two out of four stars. However, I am open to reading more of the book to see if my opinion changes as time progresses.
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