Review of WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings

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"WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings" by Mike L Junior. An interesting story book, talks about Dr. Drake Nathan's cybernetic chip cured cancer, blindness, and other diseases and changed people's DNA. Based on technology, but later became so advanced that it can't be used. Then the Era of Apocalypse began and the society fell apart.
In the case of Kaarina and Monty are two orphaned Abnormals trying to find a family of their own in Xenora, for their fate shall lead. Congrats on your #BOTD.
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I like books with good character development. A cybernetic chip that cures cancer? Abnormals? Technology and Apocalypse era? These are interesting concepts I'd like to know more about in the book. Great review.
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A science fiction book that questions the existence and motivation of God, discrimination, and war sounds interesting. And the plot with the genetic changes that led to lots of abnormalities in the next generations of people is pretty intriguing. It will be interesting to read this book. Congratulations on becoming BOTD!
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I'm disappointed with this book. I thought the characters would make for wonderful features and the plot was intriguing. However, based on your review, the mistakes would be so annoying that I would lose patience attempting to understand them. The author needs to fix it.
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Post by Nwaka Chukwuemeka »

Since I first saw this book as the June BOTM, I have been eager to read it. Naturally, none of the concerns that you raised were included in the description when I went to read it. The fact that there were so many mistakes and things that were not clarified is regrettable. I hope the author incorporates your suggestions to make it better.
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Post by Mercy Udeokeke »

WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings is an interesting science fiction story about a fallen world. Some of the survivor's DNA was altered giving them abnormal abilities. They were discriminated against and killed because of their abilities. This is a captivating story that readers will enjoy. Thanks for the great review.
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The plot is interesting and the author had something coming with this book but the low rating in the review I just read is quite discouraging.
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The plot description gave me the impression that the book is a mix of X-men and The Maze Runner. After reading about the editing errors, I believe it is a story written first on one of the multiple reading apps and then sent directly to publishing without proofreading after it was popular. Apps like Wattpad, Dreame, Goodnovel etc. So probably, if the plot caught my attention, I will try to check it there for free before I buy it, And wait until a more edited & corrected version is available on paper.
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The author did a good job in the characterization of this book. There are negatives in this book, but I'd like to read it. Technological advancement in this book was superb. Thanks for your honest review.
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I admire your honesty in writing this review. It's unfortunate that this wonderful storyline is ruined by disturbing grammar errors, inappropriate formatting, and unexplained concepts.
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Post by Summer Henrietta »

It's so unfortunate that a book with such a good plot would contain these negatives. I guess a general proofreading will do the magic.
This is a honest review.
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Post by Taiwo_Olawoye »

This fictional book talk about some special abilities in humans that results in disaster. How will this problem be solved? I hope a fix can be found. Thanks for the review.
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Post by Pauls_ »

Wow, there are really a lot of abnormal things going on in the book. What became Kaarina and Monty's fate? I guess I would have to read the find out. Congratulations on BOTD.
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Post by Paully_ »

The book cover looks scary. There's a lot going on in the book. I hope the author rectified the errors. Thanks for the detailed review and Congratulations on BOTD.
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Well-developed characters produce good stories. Am glad the author did a good on that. I hope the book will be edited to have a good rating. Thanks for the honest review.
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