Official Review: Forever Will End: Gospel of Chaos Book One

[Juliet+1]

Well, it sounds like there's enough good stuff there to merit a rewrite. I hope the author does one. Many thanks for an excellent review. You really pinpointed the problem areas, while still recognizing all the positive features.

[kandscreeley]

Well, it sounds like there's enough good stuff there to merit a rewrite. I hope the author does one. Many thanks for an excellent review. You really pinpointed the problem areas, while still recognizing all the positive features.

It's absolutely worth revamping! I think this could be a great one. Thanks for stopping by.

[Prisallen]

It's a shame that there are problems with the book as the underlying plot seems to be a good one. Hopefully, the author will rewrite it so it makes more sense and without the hints of what is to come. I enjoyed reading your wonderful review!

[kandscreeley]

It's a shame that there are problems with the book as the underlying plot seems to be a good one. Hopefully, the author will rewrite it so it makes more sense and without the hints of what is to come. I enjoyed reading your wonderful review!

I think it could be fabulous. I hope the author does a bit of rewriting as well. Thanks for commenting.

[Daniel_]

This sounds like a book I should enjoy. I like the genre and the fact that it is 'full of action'.
Great review!

[Pearl Hijabi]

Without knowing the background and the nature of the characters it is hard for me to relate. This seems like a great attempt to me. Hope the author considers developing this more. Excellent review. Thank you

[kandscreeley]

This sounds like a book I should enjoy. I like the genre and the fact that it is 'full of action'.
Great review!

I hope you find time to read it and enjoy. Thanks!

[kandscreeley]

Without knowing the background and the nature of the characters it is hard for me to relate. This seems like a great attempt to me. Hope the author considers developing this more. Excellent review. Thank you

I agree completely. I just wanted a little more information so that I could understand the characters better. Thanks for your insight.

[Jyockel08]

I go back and forth with fantasy novels and sometimes struggle with them. I’m hoping this series turns into something more and then I can dive into the books. Thank you for a great review!

[kandscreeley]

I go back and forth with fantasy novels and sometimes struggle with them. I’m hoping this series turns into something more and then I can dive into the books. Thank you for a great review!

I definitely think the series has potential. I hope you look into it further and enjoy. Thanks!

[Gabriel Merêncio]

I enjoy quirky characters, but the poor editing and on-the-nose foreshadowing would probably annoy me. Thanks for the review!

[kandscreeley]

I enjoy quirky characters, but the poor editing and on-the-nose foreshadowing would probably annoy me. Thanks for the review!

I get it. It does need some reworking. Hope you find one to your liking. Thanks.

[unamilagra]

This sounds like an interesting concept for a book. Too bad it wasn't better executed with realistic and relatable characters and more suspense. Thanks for a thorough review!

[kandscreeley]

This sounds like an interesting concept for a book. Too bad it wasn't better executed with realistic and relatable characters and more suspense. Thanks for a thorough review!

It's a great thought; I do hope the author works on it more. Thanks for commenting.

[Msred325]

You did a fantastic job, with this review. I am new and this review gave me some insight, on what to do.
The title is Gospel of Chaos. Maybe that is what the author was going for, with all of the missing parts. It’s possible that those answers could come in book two. It would be a twist, going backwards. No I think I’ll save that idea for myself, when I write a book. Lol