Official Review: Blue Screen by Kyle Benzle

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Re: Official Review: Blue Screen by Kyle Benzle

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What a shame, it seemed promising. Thanks for the honest review
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This sounds like a compelling opening! Unfortunate that the book has trouble coming through in other areas. Thank you for your review!
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NetMassimo wrote: 26 Jun 2020, 04:39 This seems a novel very focused on its technical elements that overlooked character development and some parts of the plot. Possibly an editor could help the author in the novel development. Thank you for your honest review!
That is a great idea. I would even be willing to re-read the book if the characters were developed more.
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Too many details and not enough character development. It's too bad. I like the premise. Thanks.
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Sounds like a walking dead movie script. I am looking forward to reading this enthralling book
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Thanks for your honest review. While Peter's adventure in the dystopian world sounds interesting, it seems the book needs to develop its characters more.
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