Review of On the Trail of the Unseen

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Very interesting review. I really want to read the whole series after reading your review.
I also like books that do not shy away from giving explicit sexual intercourse details and sometimes get frustrated with authors who play with our minds about intimacy. But I also like books that focus mostly on the relationship dynamics between the characters. I am going to give this book a try. Thanks for your review.
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Good review. I would have thought, from sampling a few pages, this book focused on magic, but this reviewer seems to think otherwise. I hope this book is not heavily dependent on previous ones in the series.
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"On the Trail of the Unseen" is the third book in a series with a medieval fantasy setting. The story involves a mysterious plague, unlikely alliances, and a journey to find a cure. The author's writing style is commended for its multiple viewpoints and emphasis on human relationships rather than just magic. Congratulations on being BOTD!
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This isn't a genre of personal interest, and I don't typically read books that are well into a series, so this one isn't for me. However, congrats to the author for keeping the magic alive over three successive books.
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This seems like an interesting fantasy book about a plague that is quite suspenseful.
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I want to commend the author for making this book a stand-alone novel so OBC users can still enjoy reading the story without having to worry about not understanding the plot since they have not read the prior two books. With that said, I also would like to point out how the beginning of the story immediately intrigued me as I find myself wanting to know more about this mysterious plague and if Nico would be able to travel north with his family so they can escape the said plague.
Congratulations to the author for BOTD!
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"On the Trail of the Unseen" by Lynne Armstrong-Jones is the third book in the On the Trail series. Regardless of the fact that it is part of a series, the book can be read as a stand-alone. The book is professionally edited.
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I appreciate the author's mastery of suspense, particularly in the way she skillfully leaves room for readers to imagine and fill in the gaps during sexual encounters. This approach allows for a sense of anticipation and engagement, enabling readers to actively participate in shaping their own interpretation of those intimate moments. Great review 👍
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Post by Ndivhaleni Phidza »

Reading this magical book it enables me to rethink , how are people involved in the world of witches.Ask myself if, is this practice continue? It divides the society and keep peace apart.Although it encourages debate among people themselves.
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I really like when the author shares the points of view of some or all of the characters. This gives us an insight on their thinking. This seems interesting. I am guessing the author is stingy on sexual matters is because it’s age appropriate.
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This isn't my preferred genre, but I do like stories told from multiple viewpoints, so I might read this a bit more. I'll probably take your advice though and start with the first in the series to remain up to date with the characters.
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A science-fiction/fantasy book that revolves around relationships and values is refreshing. Thank you for your review.
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Post by tarafarah7 »

Today's BOTD is Book 3 of the On the Trail series, and although it could standalone, it is recommended you begin with Book 1...you will be hooked! Filled with interesting characters and descriptions, readers will be pulled in from the start and won't let go until the very last page. Thank you for the great review and keep up the awesome work! :-)
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I would definitely start with the first installment, but the fantasy world described seems a very attractive one.
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Post by Raul Kantor Sauaia »

Thank you for your compelling review! I'm eager to embark on this journey and share my thoughts with fellow readers.

I'm particularly intrigued by your observation that the focus of the story is not solely on magic but on human relationships. This fresh approach within the fantasy genre is highly appealing.

I also appreciate your mention of the author's use of multiple viewpoints, which you found well-structured and connected. This skillful handling of perspectives, combined with a commendable medieval writing style, further reinforces my confidence in the book's quality.

Thank you so much!
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