Official Review: Soul Retrievers by David Burton

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This looks like an interesting book to read, given the idea that the soul gets send to the wrong afterlife. But the author of the book uses really short sentences in his writing style, (I read the sample), trying to create pacing and tension, no doubt. He would be better served if he used longer sentences, intertwined with the short, fast-paced ones. Just my two cents.

That's a good point. I've never really paid too much attention to sentence length before except when the sentences are ridiculously short.