Review of A Tome of Order Magic

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Interesting cover & the story about being transported to a magical realm without knowing the powers that dwells within you is intriguing. Those who are into science fiction, fantasy and video games will definitely enjoy this. Congrats on being the #botd.
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This review offers a comprehensive look at the strengths and weaknesses of the book. While the unique concept of mana and video game formatting intrigues me, the reviewer's honesty about the immature humor and lack of clear plot gives me pause. I'd approach this book cautiously but might give it a try for its creative elements.
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It's sad that the book has unique aspects but most of it is lost due to lack of a concise plot. I also don't appreciate the sexist and misogynistic remarks the author makes in the book. I would have loved to read about the world of magic which is powered by mana but due to the aforementioned discrepancies, I'll pass on the book.
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Post by Ramadevi Tatavarthi »

The review provides a balanced perspective on "A Tome of Order Magic." While praising its editing and inventive ideas like mana usage, it rightly criticizes the immature and offensive humor, which detracts from the narrative. Authors should strive for humor that enriches the story, rather than detracts from it, ensuring inclusivity and respectfulness in their writing.
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The review of "A Tome of Order Magic" praises its unique concepts like "mana" but criticizes its disjointed plot and overly detailed descriptions. While the editing is commended, the narrative feels more like a series of disconnected events rather than a cohesive storyline. Lengthy character monologues also detract from the pacing. Balancing originality with tighter plotting could enhance the reading experience.
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Magical books are usually very thrilling and interesting to read. I can not wait to read A Tome of Order Magic and find out what happens to Kai.
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Post by Anusha Thatavarthi »

"Tome of Order Magic" by Kyle, a sci-fi novel, follows Kai's journey in a magical world with unique concepts like mana. The book's strengths include excellent editing, creative formatting resembling a video game, and imaginative creatures. Thanks for the amazing review.
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Post by Sargam Talreja »

While the concept of the book promises intrigue and adventure, it falls short due to the disconnected storyline, inappropriate humour and sexual comments, and unnecessary details. Despite its potential, these missing elements may deter readers from engaging with the tale at this time. Thank you for providing an honest review.
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This book utilises the concept of multiverses in creating a different world where Kai has to feature in. Thank you for your thorough review.
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It was a bit unusual to see a book review garner 3/5 while being described as edited well. To author's credit, they did state their fair warning of the book's elements broken down by %. There were about 10 or so categories. This is a fantasy novel, written in the style of an RPG video game. We should acknowledge that we will from time-to time run into novels that are written for a target readership different from ourselves. Nevertheless, thank you for an honest review.
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I love unexpected travel to another world scenarios, because it has always fascinated me to study the reactions of individuals put in unusual circumstances from the psychological point. To see a practical man from earth in a world of magic certainly has an interesting twist and I gladly accept your gift of free book! Congratulations on BOTD!
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Post by Kigen Valarie »

I enjoy sci-fi action books but not one's that lie too much on the videography side. Kai must indeed be a great character and I'm certain those interested in this genre will find the book interesting. Congratulations.
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Writing a good otherworld science fiction takes robust skills and imagination and the author, Kyle, has crafted one with several unique elements. Congrats on being BOTD.
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Post by Nisha DSouza »

A Tome of Order Magic by Kyle is a science fiction novel about Kain, who was transported to another world. He will have to use his training to control magic and perform the job he was assigned by the archmage. The use of "mana" as the energy behind the magic and the video game format will interest many readers. I'll skip this book for now. Congratulations on the BOTD!
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Post by Swathi Ranjith »

Thank you for taking your time to genuinely address this book and writing this review so that people like us can understand the contents of this book and if it's a book worth reading. I truly appreciate it, and seeing as how you've described it, I certainly will give the book a try
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