Official Review: Forever Will End: Gospel of Chaos Book One

[Aniza Butt]

The idea of apparitions and ferals seems great but the loopholes in the plot makes this book a bit dull.
Thanks for the review Kandscreeley ☺

[Erin Dydek]

Thanks for the helpful review! I enjoy action novels and don’t mind some violence but it’s hard to enjoy a book riddled with errors and obvious plot directions.

[kandscreeley]

You did a fantastic job, with this review. I am new and this review gave me some insight, on what to do.
The title is Gospel of Chaos. Maybe that is what the author was going for, with all of the missing parts. It’s possible that those answers could come in book two. It would be a twist, going backwards. No I think I’ll save that idea for myself, when I write a book. Lol

It is a bit chaotic, for sure. I do hope that you are able to take some ideas for your own writing. Thanks.

[AvidBibliophile]

Ferals and the forgotten, less fortunate... a potentially suspenseful premise for sure, although those irksome plot holes you mentioned can definitely be distracting. Thank you for your honest impressions of this one!

[kandscreeley]

Ferals and the forgotten, less fortunate... a potentially suspenseful premise for sure, although those irksome plot holes you mentioned can definitely be distracting. Thank you for your honest impressions of this one!

Thanks for your comment. It has potential, but it's not realized.