Review of WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings

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Post by Abril Zacca »

The plot of this book seems interesting, it's a shame that some things aren't properly described, affecting your enjoyment of the book. Thank you for your honest review.
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This is a thrilling story about technology and human genetics alteration. Congratulations BOTD!
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Post by Margi zuu202 »

Book of the day BOTD is sci-fi fantasy the story is promising and although it is fictional the post apocalyptic genre sometimes be a bit repetitive or stereotypical . n'wy it's an exiting adventure and leaves one interested to see what is next in storyline Mike has brought forth creativity with unique blend of different scenarios.if I had to mention any criticism it would be that the character are too realistic and over mentioned but glad Mike has given them more emphasis.the book is worth reading and I will recommend it 💯 the narrations flow easily and the main character is loveable
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Post by Lorraine De Vos »

Thank you for sharing your review with us. I would not enjoy a book with so many errors, so I will pass on this one until it has been revised by a professional editor.
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Post by Abdulsabur Aisha »

I like the storyline of the book but unfortunately, the review of the book, shows the author didn't do a good editing job, and that mess the entire work. Of what good is a book that the readers wouldn't comprehend? Congrats on being the #BOTD!
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Am interested in this book and it's amazing plot, but maybe I will wait for the book to be professionally edited in other to enjoy it to the fullest.
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Post by Loniya Chabili Mubanga »

I don't really like fantasy novels, and this is more fantasy than sci-fi, too many characters and difficult-to-pronunce names for me to keep up with. And following your very candid review, I don't think I'm interested in reading this book. The storyline of abnormals, apocalypse eras and death eras aren't really enough to get me to jump on it.
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Post by Chinazo Anozie »

I love sci-fis, and this plot of Abnormals seems intriguing. However, I'm cautious regarding the rating of this book, so I'll have to pass on it.
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Post by Ailakhu Yusau Aizhebiomon »

It's quite unfortunate that a book with such an interesting storyline, perfect character development and a unique plot falls short of good editing. I hope the author overhauls the book for a better enjoyment experience for readers. Congrats on being the #BOTD!
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Post by dennisbragra »

Seems like the errors do wrong to an otherwise good plot. The technology errors seems to an error without cancer or by extension diseases?is Xenora protected from the norms?
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It sounds like a great plot with lots of potential. After some professional editing, I think I would enjoy this book.
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Post by Rocky Ellery James Tumbelaka »

Thank you for the review. Plotwise and character wise, it is definitely an interesting book. The premises are the kind of novel I would like to read. I hope it get edited in the future so I can enyoy reading it.
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Post by Timothy Rucinski »

With regret, I have to say this is a poorly written book. I tried reading it and couldn't get past 20% because of the excessive errors. I can't, in good conscience, recommend it to anyone, and I hope that the author hires a professional editor to make some sense of it.
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Post by Ochieng Omuodo »

Having read and reviewed this book, I share many of your sentiments. In particular, I was astonished at the sloppy errors and I just did not feel comfortable with recommending it to anyone but diehard action fans. Since it made BOTD, perhaps I was right about the audience.
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Post by Amina Yusuf »

Watchdogs Abnormal Beginnings sounds like an intriguing adventure story with the central characters seeking refuge in a far off place. I'm glad you gave an honest review regarding what to look out for when reading it. I hope it will get the much needed editing you pointed out so that readers will not be disappointed when reading the book.
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