Review of The Elfkin Journals

[Limpho Mojakisane]

I like how you explained that the story isn't just about fantasy, but also about leadership, teamwork, and strong relationships. The way King Garywings and Morning Glow support each other sounds powerful, and it's interesting that the book changed how you view some things in real life.

[Janet Kimetto]

I love fantasy, so this would interest me right from the title, "The Elfkin Journals." I read the excerpt on Amazon, and I like the mention of prophecy and magic. I would enjoy the story of a people fighting for their world. Thanks for the review!

[Lilyán Navarro-Lytle]

Is this book, The Elfkin Journals, a graphic novel? If not, please explain the comment comparing it to animation. If so, it should clearly be stated at the beginning.
One thing I appreciate about this spotlight review is how the reviewer makes personal application. He states the many themes he found in the second installment of an intriguing series and how he has benefited from the lessons he learned. I think this helps young readers have something to look forward to.
My biggest critique of this review is that the Main Character's name is consistently misspelled. He is NOT King Garywings, but King Graywings! Honestly, how was this not checked by the Editors?
Maybe they did, but for some reason reviewers aren't able to correct reviews and reload them. Editors should at least be allowed to correct spelling and punctuation errors and upload corrected reviews. Having uncorrected reviews on the website takes away from OBC's professional appearance.