Official Review: The Wachacallit by Lary Morrett

Post by **kandscreeley** » 12 Mar 2021, 17:52

Pluma wrote: ↑11 Mar 2021, 23:52 It’s always a pity when there’s a potentially great story in an idea that the author doesn’t manage to expand upon. The pace of the book sounds a little slow for me, though the premise is intriguing. Thanks for the honest review!

It is somewhat slow. I just kept waiting for it to pick up. It needs some work. Thanks.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 12 Mar 2021, 17:56

Joy Phill wrote: ↑12 Mar 2021, 05:57 The conclusion of a story means a lot. Thanks for sharing that bit about the ending. Interesting review too!

Thanks. It's interesting, but it does need work. Thanks.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 12 Mar 2021, 17:57

ViviVivid wrote: ↑12 Mar 2021, 08:33 An interesting concept with which a lot could have been done. Seems like it has a lot of loopholes and the author didn't want to continue with his initial ideas. A great review though!

It needed more development. The wow factor was missing. Thanks.

NetMassimo · Post by **NetMassimo** » 13 Mar 2021, 10:32

This novel might have potential but needs some more editing to improve its storytelling and for proper proofreading. Thank you for your honest review!

Post by **kandscreeley** » 13 Mar 2021, 18:15

NetMassimo wrote: ↑13 Mar 2021, 10:32 This novel might have potential but needs some more editing to improve its storytelling and for proper proofreading. Thank you for your honest review!

It just wasn't quite where it should be. I liked the idea, though. I hope the author develops it further. Thanks.

Jennifer Garcia 555 · Post by **Jennifer Garcia 555** » 14 Mar 2021, 16:03

What an interesting idea for a story. It’s too bad it wasn’t very interesting.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 15 Mar 2021, 18:38

Jenniferg_1105 wrote: ↑14 Mar 2021, 16:03 What an interesting idea for a story. It’s too bad it wasn’t very interesting.

I completely agree. I hope the author can fix the story. Thanks.

Chigo Nwagboso · Post by **Chigo Nwagboso** » 16 Mar 2021, 23:19

This books seems interesting regardless of the flaws. Thanks for an honest review.

TheMazeRunner · Post by **TheMazeRunner** » 17 Mar 2021, 02:32

Sounds like a great story, but too bad for the editing problem. But that could be fixed.

Mariana Figueira · Post by **Mariana Figueira** » 17 Mar 2021, 14:19

Sounds like a pretty okay book, thank you so much for the detailed and justified review, it was incredible.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 17 Mar 2021, 18:23

Chigo Nwagboso wrote: ↑16 Mar 2021, 23:19 This books seems interesting regardless of the flaws. Thanks for an honest review.

Well, I hope you find it enjoyable. Thanks for your comment.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 17 Mar 2021, 18:25

TheMazeRunner wrote: ↑17 Mar 2021, 02:32 Sounds like a great story, but too bad for the editing problem. But that could be fixed.

Yes, it had potential. It does need work, though. Thanks for your comment.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 17 Mar 2021, 18:28

MarianaFigueira wrote: ↑17 Mar 2021, 14:19 Sounds like a pretty okay book, thank you so much for the detailed and justified review, it was incredible.

Thanks for your kind words. It has promise. It just needs work. Thanks.

Justine Ocsebio · Post by **Justine Ocsebio** » 20 Mar 2021, 20:23

The premise definitely sounds intriguing: a boy discovering a portal to another universe in his uncle’s ranch. This could’ve been a great book if the premise was utilized well. Anyway, thank you for your honest review.

Post by **kandscreeley** » 21 Mar 2021, 15:38

justhereader wrote: ↑20 Mar 2021, 20:23 The premise definitely sounds intriguing: a boy discovering a portal to another universe in his uncle’s ranch. This could’ve been a great book if the premise was utilized well. Anyway, thank you for your honest review.

I agree. The premise has potential. I hope the author can make some changes and fix this. Thanks.