Official Review: Beyond by Ruth Mitchell

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:40

Booklover Becca wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 11:20 I hope the author expands on the problems you’ve mentioned because this sounds like it would be an extremely entertaining book. Thanks for the great review!

I hope so, too! I would love to read an edited version of this book in the future. Thank you for your comment!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:44

Scarbaby wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 11:23 Though I’m not particularly a lover of paranormal activity, I do find your review very intriguing. It’s too bad the character development piece was lacking. Thanks for a great review!

Thank you for your feedback!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:50

zainherb wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 14:04 The grammatical errors and lack of character development aside, this book sounds interesting.
A dog that sees ghosts? What is going on here? Lol!
Thanks for a detailed, intriguing review.

I agree wholeheartedly that the premise of this book is interesting. It had me questioning if my dog sees ghosts when she barks at empty corners

. Thank you for your feedback!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:53

PeterRabitt20 wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 17:39 Interesting! They do say that animals see different wavelengths. It's too bad that the character and the proofreading needed more work. Your call seemed fair. Thanks for the review!

It was definitely an interesting book! I would love to read it again after additional editing. Thank you for your feedback!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:57

Smmwallace wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 19:40 This book sounds entertaining, but I like that it also deals with some real-life issues. Where can I get a dog like Cloud? I wish the character development and editing were better. Great review!

I also liked that Laura was dealing with real-life issues. I'm not sure if I could handle having a dog that sees ghosts; every bark would have me convinced that a ghost was watching me. Thank you for your feedback!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 29 Apr 2021, 23:59

sharon titus wrote: ↑29 Apr 2021, 23:03 Laura seems an interesting character. I'll add this book in my shelves. Thank you for your hard work.

I'm glad that you're willing to give this book a try! Thank you for your comment.

Kavita Shah · Post by **Kavita Shah** » 30 Apr 2021, 00:17

Holly Fleming wrote: ↑29 Apr 2021, 23:31
Kavita Shah wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 01:39 I like the idea of Cloud having ghost vision. The error and the unclear dialogues is what put's me off. Thanks for the review
The book has a great plot, but I completely understand that the errors and unclear dialogues would put you off this book in its current state. Thank you for your comment!

I hope it gets edited soon, It sure has potential to be better.

John Owen · Post by **John Owen** » 30 Apr 2021, 00:27

Holly Fleming wrote: ↑29 Apr 2021, 23:38
John Owen wrote: ↑28 Apr 2021, 09:49 I definitely love this story... Too unfortunate for the flaws but it still seems a good book. Great review!
Yes, this book has an amazing plot to build on. Thank you for your feedback!

You're welcome

Raluca_Mihaila · Post by **Raluca_Mihaila** » 30 Apr 2021, 07:55

Despite its flaws, I would like to read the book. I am so curious to see what Could has to... bark about the ghosts!

Thank you for this honest review!

Dimi1 · Post by **Dimi1** » 30 Apr 2021, 09:11

It seems that the book still needs a lot of work. Thank you for an invaluable insight!

Holly Fleming · Post by **Holly Fleming** » 30 Apr 2021, 09:31

raluca_mihaila wrote: ↑30 Apr 2021, 07:55 Despite its flaws, I would like to read the book. I am so curious to see what Could has to... bark about the ghosts! Thank you for this honest review!

That's great! I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the book. Thank you for your feedback!