Review of The Magician's Secret
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A few things to note though was some editing errors in the first few chapters which I had to read and rẹ read to understand what was missing or supposed to be taken out. In all, the short read was captivating.
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I am currently reading The Magician's Secret, and your review came to mind as it's not often that you hear an author who does not describe their main characters.Ria710 wrote: ↑03 Feb 2022, 20:13 [Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Magician's Secret" by Charles Townsend.]
The only dislike I have about the story is that I wish Townsend had described the characters’ appearance more. Taking Delvin as an example, I don’t know what he looks like or if he’s tall or short. I don’t even know how old Delvin and the other characters are. This is a very simple thing, but it makes a huge impact. I was left struggling to picture what Delvin, the protagonist, looked like. Despite this, I still had a great time reading the book.
As you mentioned in your review that this was a dislike, I would like to prompt you to re-read chapter three again, as it describes poor Delvin as he assesses whether he has the looks to pull off being a magician.
'At only twenty he was rather young for a magician, and with his slim build and average height, he was not the imposing figure a magician should be.' It even mentions, how he may look funny with a blonde beard.
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As I started reading the first chapter, I immediately felt compelled to read more. The first chapter throws you into the story at a rapid pace. The events are happening very quickly which leaves you asking many questions. As a result, you find yourself starting chapter 2 without hesitation. For this reason, I believe Townsend has done a great job at setting up the story.
The story flowed at a reasonable pace and which allowed me to get to understand the characters more. Since the book contains many different places, Townsend has done an excellent job at describing each one. The added maps and building layouts at the start of the book also helped.
Out of all the characters, my favourite would have to be Princess Jarla because she was different from all the other women. Jarla is a strong, fearless, confident woman who isn’t afraid to speak up. This book is set in a time where only men could boss and women just stood by. So, it was inspiring to see Jarla go against these norms.
The only dislike I have about the story is that I wish Townsend had described the characters’ appearance more. Taking Delvin as an example, I don’t know what he looks like or if he’s tall or short. I don’t even know how old Delvin and the other characters are. This is a very simple thing, but it makes a huge impact. I was left struggling to picture what Delvin, the protagonist, looked like. Despite this, I still had a great time reading the book.
Overall, I would rate this book 4 out of 4 stars because it was an enjoyable read. I didn’t find any mistakes as I was reading, so it is exceptionally edited. Due to violent scenes in the book, it’s not appropriate for children. I recommend this book to young adults who enjoy reading books that take them on an adventure.
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