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Review of Launch

Posted: 01 Jul 2022, 01:54
by Sharill Rasowo
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Launch" by D. W. Tate.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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A child is struck by what seems to be lightning in Launch by D.W. Tate. The inconceivable reality is that an alien entity that crashed on earth has seized control of his body. The alien sets out on a mission to construct a rocket and escape Earth, and the boy finds himself a prisoner inside his own body. When the protagonist, Miles Martin, reaches the age of sixteen, the extraterrestrial finally succeeds. The chapters that follow describe the protagonist's space travel adventures and encounters with alien species.

Miles' interactions with Sylvia the sylph were especially entertaining. It was exciting to watch him develop and pick up new skills, including self-defense. Sylvia was there for him constantly and served as an anchor to keep him on his feet. The story would have been far less interesting without her. It was fascinating to watch him look for intelligent life. The author's descriptions of numerous types of intelligent life were fascinating to read. The fight sequences were also pretty interesting to me because the aliens had various fighting techniques.

This book did a good job at world-building since the author was able to provide detailed descriptions of the cultures the protagonist encountered. Anything seemed conceivable, limited only by the author's imagination, according to the way he wrote. In terms of setting up his world, the author did a good job. I was convinced as a reader that alien life existed that was more developed than human civilization by having the protagonist be under the control of alien intelligence and construct a spaceship.

The protagonist's recklessness was the only aspect of the book that I did not enjoy. He frequently put himself in dangerous positions and required assistance. At times, it appeared as though he was attempting suicide. I initially believed it to be the alien inside of him, but subsequently, he made decisions on his own that might have killed him. He was a teenager, though, and I had to continuously remind myself that adolescents tend to believe they are indestructible. He was fortunate to have Sylvia to prevent him from making any dumber choices.

I rate this book 2 out of 4 stars because I found numerous grammatical errors throughout the book. Another round of editing would be beneficial for this book because so many small errors diminished the narrative. I would recommend this book to people who enjoy the genre of science fiction, especially that which involves the exploration of the universe.

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Re: Review of Launch

Posted: 02 Jul 2022, 11:01
by Leasa Ana Maria
Part of the storyline reminds me of a movie, but I can't remember the name. Anyway, I also don't like and find it very annoying when characters repeatedly enter into dangerous but useless and avoidable situations. I liked your review. Thank you!

Re: Review of Launch

Posted: 03 Jul 2022, 09:37
by Amy Luman
I am really a fan of space travel. There is no real way to determine if the author’s perspective is correct since it has never been done before, at least not that we know of.

Re: Review of Launch

Posted: 03 Jul 2022, 21:04
by Paully_
I'm not really a fan of this genre. I will pass on this one.

Re: Review of Launch

Posted: 22 Aug 2022, 15:11
by NetMassimo
This seems like a novel with good potential but I know how distracting it can be when you're reading a book full of errors. I hope the author follows your recommendation and does proper proofreading. Thank you for your honest review!