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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Dorinthia" by Stephanie Parraz and Lindsay Tomlinson.]

For two decades, Cecelia served as Maddie's guardian, concealing Maddie's mysterious lineage. Maddie, drawn to aquatic pursuits and desiring to work with animals, remained unaware of her innate powers. The only information she received was about her parents' tragic demise in a fire, her resemblance to her mother, and features inherited from her father. On Maddie's milestone birthday, Cecelia presented Maddie with a special gift—her favorite tea. Simultaneously, Cecelia received a plea for help from her childhood friend, Tabbitha, concerning the captivity of Tabbitha's brother, Nikolas, by the Fire King in Dorinthia. Faced with imminent danger, Cecelia, unable to wait for Maddie's return from school, left a journal detailing their shared past on the kitchen table. Summoning water from her tap, Cecelia cast a spell, creating a portal to the woods. However, her plans took an unexpected turn when she was captured and imprisoned alongside Nikolas by the Fire King. Meanwhile, Maddie, discovering Cecelia's letter upon returning from school, inadvertently stumbled upon the incantation Cecelia had recited, transporting herself to the mysterious woods. As events unfolded, Maddie joined forces with Amyee and Tabbitha, embarking on a formidable quest against the tyrannical Fire King to rescue Cecelia and Nikolas. The looming question remained: would their efforts lead them to the same dungeon they aimed to liberate their loved ones from?

Dorinthia: A Legend of Elchemy by Stephanie Parraz and Lindsay Tomlinson is a science fiction that features the story of Maddie, a water-bloodline whose fate arranges her path down to avenging the killer of her age-long demised parents in a dark-power battle.

I liked the author’s writing style; the characters were well-portrayed, and their stories were well-developed. I also liked Fabian because he wasn’t in support of his father’s actions, but his decision to rescue the boy who was captured by the fire guards for throwing stones at his father’s statue was commendable. I enjoyed reading the book; there was no boring plot.

I didn’t expect the story to end the way it did. I was expecting more into the romance between Fabian and Maddie, whether they ended up together and how they both ruled their kingdoms, or who eventually ruled the whole of Elchemy, which was comprised of the Air, Water, Fire, and Earth Kingdoms. Or did the kingdoms have their separate kings? These are my thoughts, and I won't be deducting a star for them, as I think there will be or should be a continuation of the story.

I'll be rating this book 5 out of 5 stars because I found no objective reason to rate it less. It has been exceptionally well edited, as I found no grammar errors in it. It has the basic things I love about good, entertaining novels. Finally, I'll recommend the book to everyone who loves fiction and magic stories.

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Based on the review, "Dorinthia: A Legend of Elchemy" seems to be a good read. The reviewer praises the authors' writing style, well-developed characters, and interesting plot. Although they were left curious about certain aspects of the story, they still rate it 5 out of 5 stars and recommend it to those who enjoy fiction and magic stories.

Some classic tropes of the fantasy genre are used to create what seems like an engaging story in a fictional world full of magic. Thank you for your great review!

The intricate plot involving Maddie's mysterious lineage, elemental powers, and a quest against the tyrannical Fire King seems captivating. The mention of well-developed characters, commendable decisions, and an engaging writing style is appealing. The reviewer's positive remarks about the lack of a boring plot and the unexpected ending contribute to the allure of the book. The expressed desire for more details, especially in terms of the romance between Fabian and Maddie and the fate of the kingdoms, raises intriguing questions and suggests a rich world-building.

"Dorinthia: A Legend of Elchemy” by Stephanie Parraz and Lindsay Tomlinson is a gripping science fiction tale that masterfully combines intrigue, magic, and adventure. The novel excels in its detailed world-building and character development, particularly in portraying Maddie's journey from a curious young woman to a hero confronting dark forces. The unexpected plot twists and the well-crafted quest against the Fire King keep readers thoroughly engaged. Though the ending opens avenues for future exploration, particularly regarding the fates of Maddie and Fabian and the political dynamics of Elchemy, the book stands out for its imaginative storytelling and seamless editing.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on Dorinthia: A Legend of Elchemy! Your description of Maddie’s journey and her connection to her lineage sounds captivating. I appreciate how you highlighted the complexity of the characters, especially Fabian, and the dynamics of their relationships. It’s intriguing to hear that the plot maintained your interest throughout, and I’m curious about the unique world of Elchemy with its different kingdoms. I share your interest in the romance aspect and the fate of Maddie and Fabian—it's always exciting when a story leaves room for exploration in future installments.