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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Fierce" by James Kemp.]

Jason Kemp’s Fierce is an adventure story featuring Yngvild the Fierce. Yngvild grew up in Straven and was an accomplished archer. She was loyal to Noren, an orphan foundling her father, Old Bjorn, had taken in as a baby. Late one evening, a strange ship appeared. The ship belongs to the Mangadlese, who requested permission to stay for two days. During their stay, Arald questions Yngvild about what living on the island was like, claiming he traveled the world to learn about other cultures. After he leaves, Old Bjorn takes Yngvild to his private study and gives her an amulet. The amulet would protect Yngvild with Malfin's power as long as she prayed to the goddess above all others.

When the Mangadlese ship rushes to leave, the King's Seagull pursues the ship. The villagers watch as a smaller boat rows to shore. Helga Trollslayer greets Old Bjorn, while Yngvild wonders how he knows the woman. Old Bjorn admits that Lady Helga is her mother and that he is not her father. Lady Helga asks Yngvild to join her in Kronstadt. Old Bjorn, Yngvild, and Noren travel with Lady Helga to the capital. Upon arrival in Kronstadt, Lady Helga and Old Bjorn reveal that Yngvild and Noren are 'heroes,' a select group blessed with diverse abilities by gods. However, heroes are not always stable beings, especially if the deity who blesses them is the god of death and destruction.

Fierce is full of action and suspense. Yngvild is typically content following others, but when faced with differing perspectives, she struggles with doubt. She believes Noren is her intended life partner, but his feelings for her don’t seem to be as strong. The unpredictable plot led Yngvild to meet intriguing people. For example, Jerre, a cavalry soldier, should guard Yngvild as a captive. He was extremely loyal, but Yngvild’s bravery in battle challenged his loyalty to his troops. Every moment features exceptional detail. I could envision the sunsets, feel the rocking of the ship, and smell the disgusting condition of the city alleys that Yngvild navigates.

There are a few negative parts I encountered. There were many errors in the book, showing a need for another round of editing. The name Olaf is used for multiple characters in the book. There was a captain of a ship, a warrior in Straven, and a boy from a trading post who all had the name Olaf. There were some conversations where it was unclear who was talking. This happened more often when more than two people were talking. The last problem I had was switching between points of view. In one moment, Yngvild narrates the story of the first person. Then, in the same paragraph, it describes Yngvild as the third person.

I rate Fierce three out of five stars. The potential for this book to be impressive is undeniable. I removed two stars for the editing and point-of-view shifts. The unique storyline and the relatable female protagonist add to the book's appeal. Yngvild's emotions are authentic, which makes it easy to connect to her thoughts.

Fierce will appeal to young adults who like magic, mythology, and adventure books. The profanity and violence may offend some readers. The story’s intrigue will keep readers questioning which person is telling Yngvild the truth. Is Old Bjorn right? Is Lady Helga trustworthy?

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Mythological books are generally difficult to read, in my opinion, especially because the stories contain a lot of unusual names, not easy to remember- For example, if you read stories about Valhalla or ancient northern and Scandinavian culture books, you will go crazy to understand who is who and who is the son of who. I like this kind of tale but I admit that it's not a relaxing reading. Pity for too many errors.Thanks for your detailed review.

Very interesting

This seems like a novel with great potential in need for more editing to obtain an engaging fantasy story full of magic and adventure. Thank you for your great review!

Not understanding who's talking is a pet peeve of mine. I think it can be easily corrected, so I hope the author considers your comments. Otherwise, the mythological aspect makes it interesting. Is it based on Norse mythology? And it's hard to find relatable female characters.

Not exactly Norse mythology..I would think something along the lines of Gaelic but the book doesn't specify it

The dynamic between Yngvild and Jerre, the cavalry soldier, seems particularly interesting. Loyalty being tested in the face of bravery adds depth to their interactions and highlights the complexities of allegiance in times of conflict.

María Andrea Fernández Sepúlveda wrote: ↑08 Apr 2024, 19:06 Not understanding who's talking is a pet peeve of mine. I think it can be easily corrected, so I hope the author considers your comments. Otherwise, the mythological aspect makes it interesting. Is it based on Norse mythology? And it's hard to find relatable female characters.

Yes, I believe Norse though it said Viking

Well, darlin', based on this review, it seems like "Fierce" by Jason Kemps is a bit of a mixed bag. The reviewer mentioned that the book has some action and suspense, along with a relatable female protagonist, which could make it an interesting read for young adults who enjoy magic and adventure. However, there are some editing issues with errors and confusion around character names and dialogue. The point-of-view shifts also seem to be a bit jumbled. With these drawbacks in mind, I reckon it's always good to approach a book with realistic expectations. Y'all might want to give it a go if the storyline and the protagonist's emotions strike a chord with you, but do be aware of the potential flaws. Stay curious and keep reading, sugah! Brilliant execution, flawlessly crafted and executed.