Official Review: Alba by B. E. Okoh
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Official Review: Alba by B. E. Okoh

1 out of 4 stars
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Alba is an interesting, happy-feel, fast-paced sci-fi/fantasy book that might the first of a still unnamed series by B.E. Okoh.
Sam is an odd boy, or so others think. He's always bothered by things around him especially clocks and can't seem to focus on anything other than that. One day, he accidentally called his principal "stupid" that got him suspended and after telling his mother what happened in school, he went to the swing at the back of his house to think. While on it, he found himself transported to the world of Alba-- a place he never knew existed. He got the chance to know new things including a flying animal called rhizum with beautiful colored wings and have an ability to talk with human beings.
Having managed to convince the Generals of Alba that he is one of their people, they've sent him to the camp where civilians live. Sam thought he'd stay there until a dragon owned by the Third Country which is Alba's adversary, burned the camp. He then was sent to one of Alba's groups called Chandelier. The other two groups are called Michelson and Meyer, and all three of them were named after the late founders of Alba. There in Chandelier group, he met a girl named Agnes, his new friends/teammates/roommates namely John, James and Andrew, and his very own rhizum named Diana. While on training for a competition and the times he spent in the group, Sam found out that he could do things that others can't like moving things using his mind and talking to dragons-- like magic. All of these are the ability of Kastiel, the Third Country's best man against Alba who also came from Earth. After the competition, the Third Country kidnapped the descendants of each founders leading Sam, Agnes, Jack of Meyer and one of the Generals to do a rescue mission. Will Sam and the others get out alive? Or will Sam die together with the truth of his very own existence?
Alba is a book that kids and kids-at-heart might be interested to read. The idea of new worlds always thrill me and excite me to learn the things on this new universe presented to me by the creator, the author himself. I liked how Sam was transported suddenly in the swing into the new world, like it was just a normal thing for a peculiar kid, or like i was reading Narnia and it made me jealous for once living in a real world. I also liked the rhizums created by the author. It was described to have beautiful wings and colorful body. The connection they have with their owner is intimate like a friend and loyal as a pet. I commend the author's creativity.
Given the genre, i suppose the author is pressured because the bar was set so high. Not only that, Mr. Okoh got a lot of competition. I believe that many readers have read one or more fantasy books in their entire life. Personally as a fan, I've read tons of fantasies and found Alba to be very predictable. At first, i was really interested. The author started to let readers imagine a dragon. Then while the plot is building, events and obstacles happened, I already have an idea who the traitor is or what will happen in the end. The way the author built his foundations for the plot twist are clearly visible he'd given them all away.
Also, Mr. Okoh seemed to be confused with the names he himself had given. For example, "Team Syler" sometimes becomes "Team Slyer" and their mentor "Mr. Johanson" is "Mr. Johnson" so often even i got confused what really are the names of their team and mentor.
Well, the worst part is there's no character and relationship development. Sam actually is born with the ability of magic but i was hoping that the author put a little effort for him to develop, not just because he's born with it, but molded into it. I was also excited to see how Sam and the other members of the team develop their friendship, just how Hermione, Harry and Ron did. But in Alba, after some time of just being with each other, they were already sharing secrets and feel guilty not to.
With all of that being said, I rate this book a 1 out of 4 stars. There's not much typos and grammatical issues, but it appears to be poorly written. Still, i hope the author will find time to improve the book, and i suggest he resolve the whole issue in one. The thing is, it have a sequel based on the hanging ending but still doesn't make me any more curious. I do believe that there's more to it than this, so the 2, 3 and 4 will be reserved for that.
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And I also hope what you hope.

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You might actually enjoy it0719672189 wrote:Thank you for your great review,other than the few issues i would read this great book.

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Well, it's my job to write an honest reviewDarakhshan Nazir wrote:Book doesn't seem appealing to me . Thank you for your honest review


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That's so true. But i also believe that this book still has a chance to redeem itself. Thank you for stopping by.RegularGuy3 wrote:Isn't it odd to think about all the effort put into the book only for it to fall so short in so many ways? I've encountered that a lot lately. Thanks for the review.
