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Review of Unholy Alliance

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Unholy Alliance" by Tyler Chase and Laura J. Quinn.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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Vaush Bastionli is the honored Lady of Ti-Laros. Morag, captain of her guards, was accompanying her on the transport vessel that would take them to a live display of the security system. Morag insisted that Vaush wear the seat’s full harness when the ship shook violently. The transport was hit by something, ripping a large hole into the side. People who were not secured to their seats were sucked out of the vessel. Vaush screamed when Morag was ripped away. Something struck Vaush’s head. Vaush wakes up in a rainforest. She unstraps herself from her seat and searches for survivors.

Vaush finds the vessel’s remains and enters to see an injured man. She removes his helmet and recognizes Prince Comron Van Laven. After Vaush tends to his wounds, Comron learns his rescuer is the daughter of his family’s enemy. They strike a truce and share the struggle through the rainforest for five days. During their journey through the rainforest, Vaush and Comron gradually fall in love before they are eventually rescued. To avoid marrying Annabelle, Comron marries Vaush in secret. His father, Crausin, reveals Vaush is the heir to the throne, as she was not Ti-Laros. Comron is faced with the difficult choice of either obeying his father's orders or protecting Vaush from harm. Crausin hires an assassin to murder Vaush. Should he follow his father or save Vaush?

Tyler Chase and Laura J. Quinn’s Unholy Alliance is the first edition of the Van Laven Chronicles. The rivalry between Ti-Laros and Nethic was intertwined with the story without affecting the pacing. I felt empathy for Comron, as he was dependent on Crausin due to an inherited medical condition. I was horrified when I discovered the relationship Crausin had with Comron. More than family rivalry is at stake in the story. The unpredictable plot contained twists that were captivating. Two supporting characters added to the stress Vaush and Comron endured in a forbidden romance. Exceptional details were given to each scene, making every moment easy to envision.

A focused area for improvement in Unholy Alliance is the consistency in character names like Captain Sheldon and Captain Yeager. Captain Sheldon goes on a mission with another soldier. However, during the mission, Sheldon’s name changed to Yeager. Then it reverts back to Sheldon. This could confuse potential readers.

I rate Unholy Alliance four out of five stars. The lower rating was a direct result of the numerous errors present throughout the book, affecting the overall reading experience. The book sets a solid foundation for the series. Exceptional character development, a complete history, and suspense make this science fiction story full of action. The subterfuge, impending war, and underhanded tactics of both families kept me from putting this book down. I was pulled into the emotional turmoil by following each character’s point of view. The transitions between each perspective were effortless.

Unholy Alliance will appeal to young adult readers who enjoy forbidden romances that have a completely developed storyline. Profanity, explicit scenes, and violence could overwhelm some people.

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Well, howdy there! After readin' this here review, I reckon this book called "Unholy Alliance" sounds like a mighty fine read. With forbidden romance, action-packed scenes, and a good dose of suspense, it seems like it'll keep ya glued to them pages. The characters seem well-developed, and the whole rivalry between Ti-Laros and Nethic adds an extra layer of tension. I gotta say, though, them errors in the book might be a tad bothersome for some readers, so that's somethin' to keep in mind. Overall, I reckon I'd give this book a solid four outta five stars. Y'all should give it a go if ya fancy a thrilling read! Stunning imagery, evoked powerful emotions.
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This seems like an engaging science fiction novel with twists, action, and suspense. I hope the author does proper proofreading to prevent distractions for readers, which is even more important in the start of a series. Thank you for your great review!
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This sounds like a romance series that I would enjoy reading. Thank you for your review.
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Post by Olalekan Rahmon »

Based on the review, "Unholy Alliance" seems to be a captivating and well-paced book with a forbidden romance at its core. The story incorporates elements of family rivalry, suspense, and action, making it an engaging read. The character development and vivid descriptions also add to the overall reading experience. Although there were some errors present in the book, the foundation it sets for the series is solid. I would rate it four out of five stars, indicating that it is a good read. Profound insights, left me pondering deeply.
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"Unholy Alliance" by Tyler Chase and Laura J. Quinn sounds like an intense and captivating read. The combination of science fiction, romance, and family rivalry creates an intriguing backdrop for the story. The plot twists and the emotional journey of the characters, especially the forbidden love between Vaush and Comron, are particularly appealing. The review mentions some errors and inconsistencies, which is a bit concerning, but the strong character development and suspenseful storyline seem to outweigh these issues.
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This review provides an insightful perspective on "Unholy Alliance" by Tyler Chase and Laura J. Quinn. The reviewer commends the authors for seamlessly incorporating the rivalry between Ti-Laros and Nethic into the story without disrupting the pacing. They empathize with the protagonist, Comron, and appreciate the captivating twists in the unpredictable plot. The reviewer also highlights exceptional scene descriptions and engaging character development. However, they note some inconsistencies in character names, which may confuse readers. Overall, the review rates the book as a four out of five stars, praising its solid foundation for the series and its appeal to young adult readers who enjoy forbidden romances with a well-developed storyline. Inspiring message, left me feeling uplifted.
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Yo, this review of "Unholy Alliance" got me intrigued! Seems like a juicy sci-fi romance with some intense family drama. The forbidden love between Vaush and Comron, mixed with the impending war and underhanded tactics, got me all excited. The only downside seems to be some name mix-ups, but overall, this book sounds like a solid four outta five stars! Can't wait to dive into this read, ya know? Profound insights, left me pondering deeply.
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"Unholy Alliance" weaves a compelling tale of forbidden romance amidst a backdrop of political intrigue and family rivalry. With its captivating plot twists and rich character development, it sets a strong foundation for the Van Laven Chronicles. However, inconsistencies in character names and numerous errors slightly detract from the reading experience. Overall, it’s a gripping read for fans of science fiction and romance.
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The dialogue in this book was fantastic. It felt so natural, like I was overhearing real conversations. The plot was decent, but the characters really made it shine for me.
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